This is great really liked reading it . Try reading one the best I recommend it for the characters and the script . Its been a while since I read something interesting

Ah, lust, that age-old sin that men (and women) can't seem to stop. Now, if you're an avid follower of me, you'll know that I would never recommend this to anyone due to the evil nature inside these pages. Ya know: devils, sacrifices, and rituals. Notwithstanding, Zexusgo seems to wish to refine their writing craft. Let's see if we can give him pointers.So the story takes place in this fantasy world that centers on betrayal, transformation, and some survival. Zexusgo employs LITRPG mechanics, so it's clear where this story is headed.Ishar (the MC) is basically sacrificed to a devil (Satanic) by his comrades, which is where his journey begins. Zexusgo does a great job pacing things; we'll give him that. I think it's due to the LITRPG aspect because his action scenes are interesting enough to understand.Do we like Ishar? Heck no. Haha. He's a little complex that struggles too much after transforming. That's good, though, because it allows readers to understand him more. I favour Kael more. That or Rudrik. So you better not slack off on them, Zexusgo.Here are the things to improve on: explaining the LITRPG system so readers aren't lost on Ishar's ability sets, a better background to understand why Ishar was betrayed, and better dialogue (since they seem forced).This is Akito, hoping those who are lost may come to Jesus Christ as their Lord and Saviour.

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Hoping to see more chapters. keep improving and updating chapters bro.

Nice book, i just started my own novel Eternal Crowns:The Five Nations, pls check it out and tell me what you think

really love this book....its not cringe like the other books on this app ..T-T .... hope theres some romancealso love the fact that this is written in first pov....helps in understanding the character more <3

Emotional start! you a mommy gurl or mommy boy are you Author! Story is getting interesting from chapter to chapter! Keep writing...you are not allowed to slack off! I want more chapters! DO YOU UNDERSTAND! THIS IS AN ORDER! NOT A REQUEST!

Hey guys I'm the author so I want to shamelessly review my book. This novel is great so I hope you read and comment. If you also like it add it to your library. Love you all

So far, I love this book. I love the build-up. I am hoping the author gives the FMC (Myra) a back story. I love to read and have a vast library of books. A friend of mine told me about this site over a year ago, but I just started reading from here several months ago. I like how this author gives you details but doesn't drag it out. They tell the story and gives you images without over doing it. Looking forward to more of this story!

I think I found one of the hidden gems in Webnovel. When I finish all of the chapters on my other ongoing novel that i read, I decided to browse the recommendations, then I found this gem.What attracted me first is the cover. I thought the silver hair person is a lady but then I read the book description and realize that this is a BL story. intrigue, i started to read and it took me less then two days to finish all of the chapter.I truly had pleasant surprise. I really really like the MC character, Moulin. I like his inner monologue and his effort to make sure his new life is better then his past. I like how the story developed and the pace too. it's not too slow and not too fast. it give you enough detail without make yourself bored. I already put this book into my library and can't waiiiiiiiiiit for this book to have more chapter.Good job author. I hope you continue this story until it finish. Thank you for your hardwork 🥰

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The story is really interesting, The concept is new and the characters are great too. 🌞😍Are there any romance involved and if yes then please don't let it be a Harem. ☠️over all for the story development 5 stars from me. ✨✨✨✨✨