Brothers of the Dawn

great                                           this is high class yuri for yuri lovers....

it's a nice all rounder good for a first chapter I can't wait for the second

Novel is good! But i have to say! Drinking during pregnancy is harmful to development of fetus!                                                     

This is my first review, so I’m not sure how well I’ll do.The best aspects of the story are its plot and grammar. I find it very original, although it starts off a bit slow since there isn’t much action in the first few chapters. However, that doesn’t bother me too much because, in return, we get to see the introduction of characters and the development of the MC.As for world-building, it doesn’t introduce too much, at least at the beginning, but it gives us small glimpses to help us get oriented, which is a plus for me. I don’t like info dumps.I recommend reading the first 20 chapters before forming a conclusion about the novel.Thank you very much, author! Keep it up.

my first novel. give feedback on anything that i messed up on or that I could improve upon.

Shameless author review here! Had to drop those 5 stars somehow. Anyway, if you’ve got theories, questions, or just feel like chatting about the story, hit me up. I’m always lurking around.