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Sigh... Let me do it since no one gave the proper review yet –1. Mc is a transmigrated one and always thinks or should I say plan properly before acting.2. Story is a harem one, alright? I love harem... (No beta here). 3. Guy has a system that rewards him with points after he berates or beats the protagonist in any way. Points can be used in the shop. 4. Let's say the world-building is average but it's manageable. 5. You have to imagine all the character's features by yourself since it's a Chinese one. 6. So? Mc r*p*s protagonists until they are not protected by the world's will and then killed them. You got what I mean? 7. Mc gets overpowered after he defeats the first prot.8. Mc is a scheming one and you may find it boring simply because everything goes according to his plan so... Yeah f..* me.9. Chapters are free so read them as quickly as possible since it's free? Yeah the free thing is always good for me, lolFor AUTHOR,Author bro, thank you for such a Novel 🙏
(Attention spoiler in the second half of the cons)First review ever here in Webnovel. But I must write something about this book. The story is amazingly frustrating, but also a very good story.I'm very conflicted.Big Pros:- The world background is just fabulous, not your typical apocalypse story. It is also very well thought, such good imagination. The author have all my support.The story is progressing, with a good plot existing.When a story is very good, I'm a man of few words, I don't have anymore to say than this. So don't get too discouraged with the cons, because it is just some points that does not take away the fact that, it is an excellent story.Cons that frustrate you sometime:- But, (there is unfortunately always a but) the translation quality is bad and confusing because of two translators working on it. Sometime the quality is almost machine-translation-like. Sometime the name of the fu ck'n thing is a blade, or a knife, or a machette or a I don't know what. Sometime mistakes about the level of a mission or the level of a beast. And a lot more.- My second and most frustrating problem is the characters. MC is not behaving like normal people would in such world, sometime too kind, save a lot of people, especially a girl or a woman and especially ones he knows. Yes girl because legal age of consent in China is 14 years old !!!!! But for our occidental mentality, it is a little bit revolting and disgusting. I'm doing my best going forward, but then there is harem. 100 chapters and 4-5 Ex's, actual GF, love interest, one way love, and every body else who want to leap on him and f*ck him to get in his harem and survive.Sometimes 2, 3, 4 or 5 chapters of story development to save a girl and than she dies. An arc of 5-10 chapters just to realize they're literally again at starting point even worse off. He accidentally pass by a camp , get angered because he find his ex ( but more exactly a one night stand rape, with developed feeling from the girl like always in China, almost every romance start with a rape my godness). So his ex is with a new boyfriend, but get him killed not even by himself but his new girlfriend lol XD. And in the way kills a dozen of innocents men in the camp, leaving a once happy and secure camp of more than a hundred not safe anymore. I won't ever started with the behaviour of the grils/BFs, that's a another big text and I don't have the energy to complain anymore lol >.<And so on, and so on.Despite, those frustrating moments, I really like the story though, believe me. And I will keep carrying on, continuing reading nevertheless and hope it don't get worse. Pray with me,Amen~Lord YoloNatss~
Lucien cocked his head to the left as he hummed. "They're on the Hunt, huh?" he scoffed, afterwards he spoke in an ominous, but devilishly handsome manner, "Let's see if they even know the basics..."
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