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Quite Shameless of me to give myself 5 starts, but I had to do it.This story is my first shot on trying to becoming a well established writer. As I writer i am very open to my reader's reviews, and take very single comment to heart. I promise to improve my writing with each passing chapter and give you guys a story you will remember and be satisfied with.So just read the novel, I promise you will Love it
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i have read itand like the others i also got hooked really fast after two chapters can't wait for more.and for other readers your missing out in this novel peak.
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I won't comment on the story as I've only read half of the first chapter. Instead I'd like to offer some advice. I was taken aback by the writing quality which seemed more like a proper book than a webnovel story but that's also the issue. The writing quality is too good/different for this website that most people won't actually want to read it so I recommend instead posting the story to RR where readers are more used to and willing to read this level of writing otherwise I believe this story will be buried and forgotten on this website.
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so far so good unique story line and author even though new trues to improve himself every chapter compared to others this is good
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I've only read a few chapters and I already feel emerged into the story. I really enjoy the character building and look forward to reading even more. The world building is very involving and beautiful which is hard to do, nice job!Keep up the beautiful work!
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best book ever..thank you for reading and recommending it
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I really like this novel however my biggest fault isnโt with the novel but the length of the chapters. The chapters are too short. Sure 22ch a week sounds good but no when everything in those chapters could fit into 10 longer chapters. Like seriously paying for this feels so unsatisfactory. Every other chapter feels like a waste of money. Author please make the chapters longer. We donโt want 22 short ch a week. Rather read 10 chapters where it feels like Iโm getting my money worth. I read the whole 102 chapters in 5 hours. Normally in 5 hours of other books I get through 40 chapters maximum. This novel is really good, and you know fans of successful novels like reverend insanity and WOTMW will enjoy this book. The only thing stopping it from reaching those levels is the length of the chapters. Thank you author I hope you never stop writing this novel as Iโm genuinely excited for updates to a novel in a long time :)
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a review would be nice guys or comments per chapter ๐ or should i stick to reading mahnwa? ๐คฃ but i felt like i should finish what i started.. i still have 3 chapters left that i have to edit. but oh.. my wifi would be cut later at midnight.. what should i do? ๐๐ should i upload it all.. or keep it until my wifi came on.. i dont know when will i able to pay it.. maybe if you give me some review even saying my story is crappy and some love and encourage me, i'll pay my wifi immediately. then upload the 3 chapters simultaneously. oh well.. what to do.. ๐๐ค
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it's my book, sow. I hope it will be an anime one day
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I'm not really a fan of Bl but i would definetly read this,it's an awesome book a great start all in all. Keep going, Letโs goooo! Absolutely recommended if someone wants to read something hot.
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I have not started the story yet, but the name and concept is so good I will give it a nice placeholder review till I get too the current chapter...Combat Maids FTW!
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Please give me more, I wait every day for new chapters! I check at least several times a day lol! Keep up the good writing!
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