Zhan Dao Ji

first thing : I enjoy this novelthe reasons : - the MC s poised, he keeps his calm even when he is insulted, as he needs to protect his family, so far he's the only that's really done that in what I've read, at the same time he doesn't let weaker people step on him when it shouldn't happen- the MC is not a complete cheat like existence like it often happens, there is a system but everyone has access to it. so far there's only one time during which it can be said there's plot armor (the stone)- In the "cultivation world" there cannot be the intervention of someone overwhelmingly stronger as they go to other areas after becomming strong enough and they can't come back, I think it is great for the stability of the novel, and it enshures there won't be a ridiculous jump in strength coming from nowhere for the MC - the world building has started in the 70ish chapters, so don't worry about it, in any case the novel is likely to have more than 600 chapters (or so I think - in any case it does have a great potential in terms of number of chapters)the last point leads to me criticizing the haters : how THE HELL can you criticize a novel on its world building when you've only read as few as 10-20-30 chapters ???!? are you for real ?! I mean, seriously all the novels I've read on Qidian so far are bound to have hundreds if not more than a thousand chapters, just give the novels a chance to grow and set a foundation for the characters before the world, you are just being ridiculous otherwise, it's like relying on first impression to categorize people, it's nonsensicalThanks for reading me :)

Doesn’t really make sense. You’re using gender wrong in this context. A second gene of some kind would make more sense.                    

About the cover copyrights, I doubt Pony Canyon, TBS, Movic, Animation Do will come here to complain... unless your book suddenly shot to top 1 charts, but at that time, you probably will have commissioned your own cover. xDBy the way, as it looks like author doesn't know, this is a cover related to the anime Clannad.Now, about the book. It looks very good, and I like the premise in the synopses. Gonna check it out later.

A very sad 2/5 for its spark of originality. The MC is supposed to be like one of the primordial Gods in a newly made world. But he starts from 0 cultivation and has knowledge of the future like all other gods, but this futere can be altered. Confused?I dare say you will never meet a more INCONSISTENT novel ever. The time intervals are completely irrelevant. By chapter 2 the MC has cultivated for milions of years and then after many other years goes to impart cultivation techniques to the ordinary creatures which do not really know what its like. BUT in just 10000 years these commoners which have no preordained knowledge or countless treasure like the MC does, they achieve a jigher realm than the MC. This is just an example from myriad.The author just dumps a lot of random lore, impossible to remember or see the bigger picture. And the translotors, which are average at best, just translate it robotically. Lots of terms that are not explained is really annoying. For MC character, utterly illogical. An otaku apparently which magically transforms and becomes the most productive guy ever, because we k ow otakus are very hardworking. He cultivates for milions of years but still always thinks of his previous 0.000001% life on Earth. No character interaction whatsoever. This novel it is honestly pure sh1t, so don't give it a chance.

I read the first 15 chapters and imma stop here Bc I’m not a fan of dad and also not a fan of romance nor harems so imma still give an5 Star Bc it was really good while it lasted...

when chapter 28 Release? 1 month next chapter not Release.So i hope next chapter was  immediately Release thank you i wait next chpaterrrrrr

I really like your writing style. Easy to read and understand without having to read a paragraph twice. The story is fun...the pace too. Add this to your library if you haven’t yet. Its a good read... waiting for more chapters!

I would give this novel a decent rating for the story but the word in the story need to increase.