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Honestly, it's a decent read. No outrageous golden finger. The mc's ability to catch up in his cultivation while starting much later than others is reasonably explained. He has a decent amount of plot amour but it's relevant to the story as fate seems to play a significant role. Female interests are decently written, not very complex, but likable nonetheless. The story progresses on the slower side but at a rate where you don't feel you're dragging, so you don't get bored. It's not SS or RI but it's much better than all the system xianxia grabo we get these days. Only con is the translation doesn't keep up with the grendering properly. *reviewing this at 60 chapters in*

Fairly decent, enjoyable book. I have to disagree with some of the other reviews, though. It certainly isn't a masterpiece. That being said, It does have potential, especially if the author focuses more on edits and proofreading. His name is inconsistent. There is a full paragraph in one of the more middle chapters that is a directly copied ChatGPT response, which was a bit of a surprise. If the author steps up the editing and makes sure to keep the story itself smooth sailing like it is till chapter 25 so far, it has serious potential.

A very good bookie I really love fantasy and this books has things that got me fantasizing with what I have read so far it’s interesting I’m new to web novel and got introduced this book and I liked it I would recommend this book.

I always love investation type ciancia system, so here, have a 5 star

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It's amazing... the story have potential with plot to develop Its good the see those chapters continue with good work👍👍 and continue this story bro

Top class story you have written I am impressed man                                                                                                                                                                  .

I read Arthur novel but this is my favourite 😊😊😊😊 i like the but these chapters are small

Amaxzing story definitely enjoying the ride. Waiting to unlock more chapters. Good job author 👍

Quality of writing is amazing, characters are intriguing and complex. The story is one for the ages. This book is pure entertainment and story.