Transmigrated Into A Game

The premise is interesting: our MC basically trades his emotions and lifespan in return for the best talent with swords ever, and has only 5 years before he dies. He has to achieve his goal -- revenge on his extremely powerful family that wanted to use him as a cultivation resource for a cousin -- before that time is up, so he has to reach extreme cultivation levels in the sword. The story goes on past the point where he gets revenge, and his goal becomes achieving the highest level of cultivation he can. Pros:- the early characterization of him after he trades in his emotions as someone who is amoral and only cares about other people positively or negatively to the extent that they can benefit him ... is quite refreshing compared to the lustful and prideful MCs we might have seen before.- early on, the time limit seems to add a sense of urgency to the MC's development, and give the sense that the novel will advance quickly Cons:- at some point he decides that following his inner desires to punish evil helps his cultivation progress, so he starts acting more like a typical hypocritical MC; this goes away later after he powers up some more.- the author stops mentioning the time limit at some point, the quest becomes a typical power up quest, and the plot starts to drag on.- the chapters devolve into mostly filler in the later stages of the novel- the QI updates are too slow considering that most of the chapters are filler.I like the world, cultivation system, the original premise of the MC selling his soul (essentially) and having a hard time limit before he dies, and the MC originally not caring about how other people think or act unless it impacts him. But the author seems to have decided to drag out the plot and pad the story with filler, and QI's slow updates exacerbate the bloody-spit-inducing exasperation of the stretched out plot. Overall it's a nice world, and the plot is interesting. However the filler-rific nature is overwhelming, so I don't recommend reading this until it's been completely translated, so you can skip and skim as needed and don't feel the annoyance of waiting 2 weeks to get a reasonable 4 days worth of plot development.

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Very underrated, just get through 10-20 chapters and you will be hooked. The best points are the characters, their interactions, and comedy, which stand out among the vast majority of webnovels here. Translation quality and frequency are great considering the lesser popularity and lack of ads or premium (don't fight me but I'd support either for a lesser known good novel with good translation like this). Story development is kind of slow, but not unbearably, and the background of the world is good but not the best, and is kept vague on purpose so far. Note: You may get a harem vibe initially with the many women around the MC but it's really not like that at all (the women don't show any romantic interest as of 241, also according to others it's not a harem and only one love interest appears at 1400 or so). In fact despite the fact many stores try to pull off the "a lot of girls around the MC but pretending it's not a harem

Intreaging idea but too generic, but you can fix that by making your novel like a movie if you can structure it in a way it would make it interesting and attractive you will make whatever your trying to make great if not better. (For example watch some movies about the subject your going for)

I like this novelbut the romance between MC and Heroine is so fastit should be development for this charachterbut sudden romance make this so nonsense

Well if your guys just starting to read this... you gotta be aware of two things.. (1) this novel will hook you up and you wont wanna let this go but as of (2) now it stoppped updating. So, if you dont like waiting never start reading. If you already did, be ready for frustration and agony.

What would you do if you got a system? Well no one cares because this isn't your story.

And so my weaknesses sealed my fate.