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deadmandreaming27q
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ntww12
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could get you addicted in the first few chapters. nice work
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deadmandreaming27q rated it Overnight Heiress
May 14,2025
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So guys, this comments section will be used for FAQs and sorry for the inconsistent releases but from now on it will be consistent with 1 chapter per day but release time ain't fixed. Just add it to your collections and vote it every single chapter you like. Do it only if you genuinely like it
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deadmandreaming27q rated it Luna Verdict
May 14,2025
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Hope author sees this- keep this book smutty- please
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ntww12
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Wow! I don't get where the author was going with this prologue.But the scale of story and power levels is insane.I don't know if I am to pity their fates or say they deserved it.Everything is a scheme. I don't know if it's a good thing or bad. So far it's perfect, I guess.And a protagonist creating his own rediculously OP System?This story is definitely not for light hearted audiences.Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I really like the story but from Chapter 18 it totally got fumbled up. I mean the timeskip is okish but it too much it remove the essence of the starting which I basically like the most. Their struggle how he overcome it with his pure intelligence. Overall the story before that is too good but from that chapter it goes downhill.I got totally confused what happening and when happening ,where happening. Each chapter like new time new place suddenly.
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deadmandreaming27q rated it I saw the Devil
May 13,2025
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Gosh the MC is a mushroom, now that's something new I haven't seen in web novel before, I'll say it's cool lol 😆 but I wonder how week the mushroom is going to be though
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ntww12
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Book is doing very well. Keep up the work 👍                                                                                                               
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With just the 13 free chapters available, it's extremely evident chatGPT did a lot of the heavy lifting while writing this novel. The concept is very interesting, and the first few chapters are by far the best simply because it's not extremely evident that it was made using AI or with help from it, but after the initial introduction, roughly around chapter 6, its just a slog of AI generated topics with a few changes made here and there by the author so it would fit the story, before changing into an AI generated exchange between characters.It wouldn't be an issue using AI if the chapters were at the very least engaging to read, but the amount of repetition and useless back and forth, combined with the massive amounts of flavor text that is simply there to increase wordcount, just really kills it.I'm not reading past the free chapters, and I can't really recommend it either, unless you don't mind the AI. if anyone decides to do it: beware of heavy text dumps and poorly explained exposition.
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ntww12
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It's good so far, it is super funny, yet serious. The female lead/harem queen is awesome. Though I do wish that he would be more confident showing affection to her in front of others, making her embarrassed.
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ntww12
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The book is a good one and I have to say that I'm impressed with it. Good one author.
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Beginning chapters already sealed the deal for me. Mc is quite pathetic actually. Half of the chapters he just kept saying how he didn’t deserve to be in this world and how he should die and some other dumb stuff which honestly makes you able to tell the mc won’t be a fun one or anything. Seems to be a bit of a simp for sure. Not to mention the beginning made no sense either but whatever. Title got me interested but the chapters got me uninterested.
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An advice...work better on your book synopsis. Just saying, this is the journey of this person and this person does not do enough justice to the book's quality content. A little more details might help to get potential readers attention.Nice work though. continue.
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