its quite good one .. lets see how it progresses

The story is full of mysteries. I can't wait to find out what happens next, which keeps me excited to follow the story. Nice job!

Even a tiny spark of fire  can turn into a majestic flame when given the time and here I see a spark worthy of turning into a flame that can engulf the world. improve your grammar lulululululululu

Interesting plot settings 🤔 I like what you've created here it is very Captivating .

Amazing 😄😍 and interesting I just love everything about this novel

Lods from what you've said on the bus I really found it interesting so I read it. I didn't expect to be so good!💯 the originality, storyline, characters and creativity is so unique, so I give overall 5.0 stars🔥 try ko din basahin yung ibang books mo lods

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.

I read it up to chapter 15. In my opinion, this book has the potential to be an engrossing novel if the author learns from his mistakes when he is writing this book. You can't say much about the whole book when it has only this many chapters but the characters are fine, they don't have much depth and they are a little cliché but you can read without feeling anger about them every chapter. Mc is not stupid and we see that he thinks before taking action, so he has some common sense in his head and you may like him (some even may say that he is smart) and for sure he is not a person who thinks only by his lower body parts, there are problems with him like author make him extremely cold in some situation but sometimes he behaves like petty and very emotional but nothing that can't be changed for the better later in the story.  Worldbuilding is great and very interesting, but you just need to lower your expectations a bit to enjoy it if you have high standards.  Updates are chaotic sometimes you have so many chapters that you think is Christmas and other days there are none for 2 days.  The author responds to comments so he is engaged in this novel and for now, it seems like he cares a lot about the book and tries to learn to make it better, for me, that is a huge plus.  In my opinion, if made well this can be more than mediocre but if the author doesn't learn from his mistakes or stop trying to improve this can be worse than mediocre. It's worth trying if you like Villain MC and have some time to spear and help this author shine by leaving your opinion in the comments.  I wish you a marvelous day, friends from around the globe.

This story really drew me in. The world building, and the ancient powers and a changing landscape, feel alive and rich with possibility. Argolaith, the protagonist, is a quiet and determined character, and I found myself rooting for him as he discovers his true potential. The mix of introspection and adventure kept me hooked, and I loved the mythical elements woven throughout the story. It’s a captivating read, especially for anyone who enjoys fantasy and coming-of-age tales.

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Personally, I genuinely love Zara so much!I love how she takes charge so easily but for some reason, she’s so timid with Alaric 😭Im so curious to see how this plays out!!!💕PS: Alaric is sooo hottt