Great read, a very good attempt from a novice author. The story plot is quite engrossing which you don't get much of trom the 'R-18' tag. Character development is greatly done too.There are a few mistakes here and there and forced scenes(but hey that's what most of us are reading it right?) and attempts to make things complex but overall a great read.
Though I had read only a few chapters but they are enough to hook me up. World Background- The world setting is really Exhilirating. I liked the way author gave a detailed info about everything. character setting- Characters are good. it's not hard to relate and understand their views, which I found good because it helped me to connect to the story. plot setting- The plot seems to be revolving around the royal and castle things, which is a nice one. I liked the plot setting. The only thing which somehow poked is there are way too long paragraphs and dialogue are incorporated into it. which somehow becomes boring to read for a longer times. and also the explanation is quite much. Rest all the things I loved about it. keep it up author, written in a good way.
Very good book overall (at least in the earl phase) ,good development, not many errors in the grammar as well,it's kinda like a system story but without one ,the book is interesting, can't wait for more.
The first work of TJSS and also one of the novels that i already finished reading that made me satisfied with good ending. This is worth reading even if its a harem since the author made development with them and mc. My problem only is that Qidian International stole the translations of Wuxiaworld.
Pancakeswitch got the best stories with great plots.... Here is another of her books. I'm so intrigued to read and join the adventure. A ghost with a system. sound interesting.I recommend to you all, it'll be worth your time.
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