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TimVic
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ntww12
TimVic rated it Kumpulan cerpen about love
May 14,2025
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HOW IS THIS NOVEL NOT MAKING WAVES ?!!!!It's amazing...                                                                                                  
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TimVic rated it Sword & Shenanigans
May 13,2025
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The premise of the story is interesting. A young prince of a particularly unfair kingdom is found to not have any magical abilities and is exiled. When all seems lost, he is transformed into an angelic species, a nephilim, and gets to prepare his revenge into the rival country.The story is however not particularly well written, and it’s not just because of the recurrent typos (which seem to often be caused by an autocorrector). It is frequent for the author to make long redundant descriptions when the point was already well conveyed in one paragraph. The character is often justifying his actions over and over when his motives were already sufficiently obvious given what we knew of him. Sometimes the author repeats what he just said, as if he never reread himself or has unfinished sentences. In short, the story suffers from a lack of editing, proofreading.
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TimVic rated it Accidental S-Class Hero
May 13,2025
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I start to read it and it is good . but i think it will need to more time .
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I have been a reader of Kimjonglei's books for roughly 6 months now and I am very happy to see the release of a new book, Dream Of A Different Tomorrow. Kimjonglei's other novel Shameless One is what got me into consistently reading his books. I have used Webnovel for many years but have failed to come across an author who prioritizes plot design and more importantly their reader's opinions and needs above his own. This new book is yet another thoughtful piece and gives me a different vibe to Shameless One which focuses on the development of the main character, Shun himself. Dream of a different tomorrow highlights the main character, Nathan Modernson's changing ideologies towards the world, and attempting to create a "different tomorrow" for the good of others and bearing all the pain himself.I have read all of the chapters in this book so far and I'm looking forward to future updates. In conclusion, I strongly recommend checking out this novel and thanks to Kimjonglei for writing such fascinating books!
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TimVic rated it Song of Supremacy
May 13,2025
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Since the author proudly claims to be shameless, I suppose there’s no problem if I am too! Many authors start off strong, but I’m waiting to see how this one ends. If it turns out bad… well, you’ll see what I do next! Lol 😆.
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TimVic rated it Eternal Crystal
May 13,2025
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It’s not a bad story but honestly it’s suffering from two things. The pacing and the MC being not a character. The pacing does get better but MC personally is just not there. She might have had a better personality then she was emotionless. Again, it’s not a bad story just not for me.
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Love the story so far! Just wish we could know more about the power system and surrounding areas a tad bit more! Excited to see this pan out! Hope it’s a bit long!
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Just started reading it now and am in love with it already . Hope will see so romance in play . I just love how Thiers a mixture of comedy and thrilling action Hehehe
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TimVic rated it Secret's Entrance (Complete )
May 13,2025
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This is peak.  I have really been enjoying it. Author great job.
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This WOW. Okay, this book is soooo good, I can’t even—Harold Etton is just trying to live his life, and then BAM, he finds this weird thing called an Artifact. And then BOOM, everything changes. It’s like, why didn’t I find an Artifact to make my life cooler?!? So Harold’s life is pretty messed up, and he’s just kind of existing, you know? But then he finds the Artifact and suddenly he’s important. There’s magic, there’s stuff happening, and he’s like whoa, and I’m over here like “Can I have one too??”The story is really fun and easy to read. Stuff happens fast, and every time I thought I figured out what was going to happen, it didn’t. The Artifacts are cool, and Harold’s pretty relatable, like, you feel bad for him, then you’re like wow, Harold, you’re awesome. It was like my brain was turning to mush from trying to keep up with all the crazy things going on.The twists are wild. You’ll be like, “Whaaaaat just happened?” but in a good way! It makes you think... maybe I should find an Artifact myself? So yeah, it’s really fun, kinda crazy, and gives you brain rot in a good way. Totally recommend!REVIEW
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TimVic rated it The Brave Vengeful Girl
May 12,2025
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This story is good , but the author kept the story on hold
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"I was the number 1 hero before I died and came back to life, so you can be sure I know all about heroics! Now watch as I brutally gore and dismember this group of men and women harassing another person in an alley." Hero MC not being heroic, story that seems obsessed with gore, decisions that don't make sense, world that is a hodgepodge of completely different fantasy world styles.Like let me walk you through this, he's sent to this island to take care of a swarm of monsters, dies to secret powerful entity, after learning of this the hero association... cuts his body into little pieces to "hide it" and replaces him with a different hero? And when the MC's immortality kicks in and his giblets recombine, he wakes up a month later to find himself on the island now busy and populated? So they just left his cut up pieces exactly where his body was right next to civilization? He also woke up beside his katana "Doombringer" (don't even get me started on that edginess) which means they just didn't take it?
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