Re: Member [HIATUS]

Disappearance of Subhash Chandra Bose

The heart of time...

We go near a small room. Until we here a guitar strumming.

Well that proved there is a lot of mysterious thing that exist in this world. Because of the intiligent of the human of course, now we knew there is any kind of creature that cant be seen.

I've read through Chapter 121 and I can say that in my mind this has finally gone from just a well-written story with lots of potential to a story with really good development and follow-through. I can't wait to see where this series continues to go!

I’ll start off by saying I’m not a regular reader of the genre so I can’t compare it to other works, but I can say I found it to be an enjoyable read and will focus on the opening chapters. I liked how the MC’s characterization was done by showing his swift decision making and improvisation in the opening action sequence, accompanied by dialogues by other characters about him rather than use of a long internal monologue to expose his character.It has an action packed opening sequence which is gripping, but it might feel a tad long for some readers. If you are a fan of the action genre though, I can imagine this could be a plus rather than minus. As for the language, it is written in concise and clear sentences with hint of humor that comes across in MC’s narration during the fight which conveys more of an amusement than panic. The simple and direct tone of the narration is something I personally like myself, but it might feel a bit short of depth for readers who prefer more complex and nuanced writing style. One thing I can say though is that being simplistic does not equate to omission of necessary details here as you will never feel that the visualisation is lacking due to details it leaves out, i.e., what’s happening in the scenes are clearly delivered and never confusing. The basic world building is established to some extent through the action sequence rather than an exposition dump, so that was good because you get to see the variety of the MC’s power right from the start, and the fight with the mecha quickly establishes that it is a world that combines futuristic and high-tech era with fantasy element of magic like super powers coexisting. My only concern is that the opening chapters might be a hit or miss in general, as some readers who want more insightful exposition of the world and the lore early on might get impatient while those who like a slow build up would appreciate it. Overall, I think this is a work with potential that is worth giving a go. Good job!

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the writing quality is good, I haven't seen any noticeable grammatical error until now. the story holds potential with the mc's race which I shall not spoil and the different skills,  for the characters we are only introduced to the mc for now who is fairly intresting and we don't really know much of the wider world but what we have seen is intriguing., the author updates regularly so there's that.

Very good novel as usual from this author. Sadly he is also known to drop his novels suddenly for no particular reasons. Maybe it wont happen for this one ? I dont have much hope but who knows...

When The Character Resembles Christina Yang From Grey's Anatomy 😂😂😂😂

This novel is so refreshing. Please update more, author 🥹🥹🥹

I absolutely love your book, the setting, the main character and especially the skills he has.Keep up the good work.