I like this novel till now very good read for me.

it is a nice novel I urge everyone to try to read it learn from it ,feel how it's sweet and comments

Yeah, the story is ruined for me because why did you add a second person from his world?🤦

I like it and that is why I am giving It a five-star rating. One thing I encountered is that in the first few chapters of this book, you have to read each line carefully and then think over it before you can understand it and then move on but in the later part of this book it was much easier for me to understand and I liked that. It is all about science and technology, which brings you to a whole new world. Eric got to create his world with his laws full of magic. I love it, keep up the good work author.

allmost done with the book of wrath, next book is more on the real world,only 5 more chapter until the next one, thank you for tuning in and see you on the next news

i hope that in the webtoon will have an another chapter I really want to read it there also😓😓

The story is really good. I suggest you to give a try to this. You should like it

you character design is awesome l really like you book . it's interesting .

I don't know who the author is but he slayed with this masterpiece ✨️✨️

I want to give this novel a good review, but I can't really do that. I refuse to pad my review to make someone feel better.Author, your premise is decent. I can clearly see from the dialogue that you have a plot planned and there's a deep story being written.The problem that I'm having is that there isn't enough. At some point between conceptualization and actualization your story falls short. We can clearly tell that there's a story behind all the numbers that you want to invent, but the story isn't coming through well enough.While reading this novel, I felt like I was in a cellphone with spotty service. Sometimes it would be there, and other times it would be missing.You're not transitioning your thought processes enough to allow the story to flow properly. It's all jerky and uncoordinated.I feel like for every two or three plot devices, there's only half or less than half of the amount of world building that's required being put in. Sometimes your characters introduce things with zero Segway into them. No build up, no explanation.It's a random thing throw into the middle of a scene that is supposedly used to transition into another scene, the problem is that there's no transition. It feels shoddy.

good novel                                                                                                                                            

ngl the beginning is veeeeeeeery captivating, I don't think I'll be stopping anytime soon