Crush ko oh mahal ko

You're the best writer ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!

currently at ch 34. below average story. The author tries to portray mc as a thinker and intelligent person, but he is stupid. showing off way too much, instead of remaining low key

Hmmmmmmmmmmm.m.m.m...m....m...........m...............m. I'm enjoying the story so far. It is a little slow, but other than that, it's good!

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"When I was 9 I was 25. I went to school on 1 foot up hill both ways. I went to school before physics was invented. I had to fight two lions everyday. The same lions. Now they do my taxes. My other foot was off starting a business."               -Steven He's Dad

The book is interesting  and brings out the best of the characters so far. the story development flows well to bring clear picture of the story and the background

This is clearly being machine translated. The "translator" can't even be bothered to properly edit the MC's name. Repeatedly there are chapters with the name "Night Wind". Also the formatting from the supposed editing is horrendous.

the MC is pretty much a decent nice guy which makes him pretty boring even now that he is a skeleton like many other isekai what I never got the point about turning the MC into monster/undead etc. if they are still gonna act human in all the ways possible. At least put some conflict in the persona, not asking for psycho killer maniac. Skipped most of the fights for the most part they are meh, the spells are convenient maybe too much feels like author avoids showing them in the level up so he can pull whatever helps him progress through the next fight. Something interesting needs to happen soon or least that comedy needs to show.