Okay, to the point, first, your writing still needs improvement, many are too short, and moreover, emotional blur, but I noticed an interesting flow, just don't get good execution, for the next you can learn how to write better, such as making the narrative feel alive, etc.

Hello~ Hello~This is the author, anybody who can spare a min to criticize my little world please do so. I love to fill in the gaps that I can probably fill in the future!

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?

  I like it                                                                                                                                             

Nice. I love the story but I can't say much since I'm still reading. Just wanted to say this book is a nice read

This was a tradition here before. Giving a welcoming greetings to all the fellow readers and writers through ratings, I don’t know people still do this , but I greet you, yes you, who just stumbled upon this novel. 🙏 and as you keep reading this comment or rating or whatever, get comfy and have a happy read. …..Highelder, over and out.

My novel, Glory in Jamie’s Punch, is fast-paced and full of raw emotion. It’s all about Jamie’s journey through boxing, where every fight brings him closer to his dream. If you’re into intense action, big struggles, and underdog stories, this one’s for you. I upload 2-3 new chapters every week, so there’s always something fresh to read

This book is a great addition to the genre, blending action, adventure, in a World that became a "game". It feels really refreshing to read, and is just at the right place between originality and mainstream.The grammar is generally well-done, with clear words that aren't overly complicated for non-native English speakers. There are a few typos here and there, but they don’t detract from the overall experience. The author clearly puts effort into improving, as the latest chapters's quality is increasing every day.Character development is a point that is difficult to rate, as we've mostly seen Sora for now. We delve into the character's thoughts quite often, and it's easy to grow attached to him. I'll read future chapters to see how it goes for new characters.The story development is steady, and the pacing strikes a good balance between action and quieter, reflective moments. So far, I love the world building and the simple yet efficient concepts that rule the world.The writing style is one of the things I like in this novel. The fights aren't 5 chapters long, we are not spammed by the sounds of swords clinging, or have random Young Master jumping from out of nowhere to get face slapped. The dialogs feel good to read, the descriptions are good, and the emotions conveyed sometimes triggered a reaction in me. The author might be new, but I can feel the intention to write something really good.It might not please everyone, but I must say it is worth giving it a chance. The story starts well, but it gets even better as you read more and more.

It's a good read, I like that it doesn't waste your time at all, not overwhelming you with useless information like so many novels do. That's for my review.

Will there be a discord server? Pls 🙏 It would be much appreciated.

A good story overall with an interesting plot. I’m definitely adding it to my collection . Keep it up