REBORN AS KARNA WITH AN OP SYSTEM

The is basically a kid friendly kingdom building novel with no political intrigue or conflict. All the changes he does have no repercussions, conflict, and passes too easily.He introduces modern weaponry without any safeguard to espionage (he increases the budget for internal security and that’s all he did) but nothing gets leaked or stolen. It would had been better to introduce conflict when designs get stolen.He signs modern reform bills left and right like free education and agriculture reforms like he has infinite money and no concerns. There should had been more though put into this or rolled out progressively instead of all at once.There is no political backlash from the conservative faction (if they exist at all) from all the modern reforms rapidly being introduced. The romance feels like a middle school kiss and get pregnant love and very forced and rushed. The new queen is an innocent trophy wife with no character and introduces no drama or plot additions. He also allows her to choose if she wants to reject a political marriage between monarchs and the most advanced nation like it’s a middle school girlfriend breakup. It would had been better if she was a princess of an enemy nation or eastern countries so you have a vehicle to naturally move the plot to other countries with some drama and conflict. Also the pacing between the introduction of the terrorist attacks with the next reattempt is too long and readers don’t care about the terrorist group that killed the parents anymore.Add some conflict and don’t play it too safe.

The cultivation abilities dont have much background but are fairly simple to follow.  The main character is a sneaky dude who will subdue his share of ladies with his strange technique and if you're here for a deep story... this aint it.

Everyone this is just my personal views on this novel. This novel is awesome and has a lot of potential to be with the top 50.If you like mmorpg martial gamer then i bet you will like this novel because of the similarities  like clans in modern world and a runaway from his clan. So its quite similar also i think it has the game mechanics like 100% completion rate stuff like that so I guess it is inspired by that novel.Author pls dont spam his Attributes its annoying also pls do this to your attributes 50 --- 68 so we wont get confused of what changed. I hope that you will post a stable update for us and Good Luck writing this novel.

Writing Quality great.Stoy it's too early to judge but it look good.Character Design I halfway do not care I just hope the last people is black. Updating is great but u probably shed upload one chapters a day after 150 ch.World background is good for now.

Hey guys, author of Chaos Simulation here. Plugging my own work.This is a story that I've been writing in my head for at least six years. It definitely starts out a little slow, as this is the first time I've ever written a fiction story for others in my life. My goal is to publish at least 12 chapters a week, possibly more depending on how popular the story gets. If nothing else I love sharing the story with others and maybe you can get the same amount of joy out of reading CS as I have writing it. I have four arcs planned and the story has a definite ending. Any comments or questions about the novel I'm happy to answer. Until then please enjoy!

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