The story has potential but the “fighting scenes” isn’t great as it should be more formatted and descriptive at least and the grammar needs improvement.

Well Writing a review for your own book is not a good idea so they say? But whatever, so I’ll just say a few things. Also, if you have any questions about the novel, you can leave them in the comments! I truly don’t mind answering.“First of all, what is this book about?”It’s about a young hunter named Sakamoto, who unknowingly carries the legacy of the First Men—a forgotten lineage of the strongest warriors to ever exist. As the world is thrown into chaos by a secret war between powerful factions, Sakamoto must uncover the truth about his origins, harness the terrifying force within him, and survive against those who seek to control or destroy him.“What type of guy is Sakamoto?”Familiar name lol i know but,He’s a reluctant warrior burdened by fate. Once an ordinary young man, he’s thrown into a world of monsters, hunters, and gods, where he has no choice but to adapt. He’s loyal, determined, and dangerously unpredictable—especially with the forbidden entity  inside him.“God-like Strength?”Not exactly. Sakamoto is strong, but his power comes at a price. Every ability he gains brings him closer to losing himself. He has to struggle, train, and master his own limits—because in this world, even the strongest can fall. Romance?”Not exactly, I’m sorry but if I have a change of mind there will be but it will be a slow burn. With the weight of destiny on his shoulders, Sakamoto doesn’t have time for love… but sometimes, emotions can’t be ignored.Chapter updating?Right now, I’m focused on crafting each chapter carefully. Updates will be consistent as the story unfolds, and major arcs will be planned ahead to keep the pacing strong, But that depends on a lot of things though.And, finally…Why do u review this book? Some would wonder if this book will be worth it and my answer for you is Yes, As an Author I always learn and adapt that’s one thing I want you to know. So I know And  think this book is going to be  good. I believe in my story. If you love a mix of intense battles, deep lore, and strong character development,plots, then The First Men Chronicles is something you won’t want to miss!I won’t say too much. Join the train and trust the process.

Hey guys I am the author of this novel and i have literally many ideas revolving in my mind. I hope you enjoy the novel. if you are finding these chapters kind of boring then don't worry the real game is just about to begin...

Although is just 4 chapters, I like the authors writing style and the word background? Epic!!! please we are urging you to complete the story...  also I am a big werewolf fan, that means I have high expectations for the novel. more inspiration and insights to your writing.

wow you are doing great job, I look forward  seeing Eddy as Billy, keep up the good work

Please Don't Make It R18 Though That's My Omly Wish, It Lains Me To See A Good Romance Story Turned By Lust And Seduction

It's really good. Jus trus me. The beginning might be a tad rough but I've defo seen worse... Hidden gem right here.... Well, it's not all that hidden tbh. All over the leaderboards and stuff. It's still good tho.

Hey guys! This is the start of my first ever novel. I am exited to start this journey with you. If you have any critique or suggestions please write a review, so I can improve as an author. You can treat this comment as a Q&A.

good character design  keep it up . As for r18 scenes , its excellent . its funny to think that villain got heroine pregnant before protagonist came to city 😂😂

yep, time to review. Not many chapters have been uploaded yet, but I already have feeling that the world building will be great. Continue author 🔥🔥🔥

This story has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see how it unfolds. Am I seeing the cover right is that some sort of hyena-dragon hybrid?if so it looks insanely good I've never read of something like this. TRULY UNIQUE!!! Keep up the good work!

Everything W nice Keep it up and nice poetry