I want to like the story, but the grammar is just hard to stomach after 10 or 15 chapters... please find a beta or proofreader... This story has so much potential, but the bad English is ruining the enjoyment of the story.
Absolutely mesmerizing story line. Cant stop reading. All other duties was put on hold until I finished the story. Will definitely be looking for more books by this author.
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Echidna : "Regarding the portal… That's something that I could never figure out. You, Regulus, Contessa, The Wardens, The Warriors, you are all from Eldia. A World that appears to be far more developed than this world. Thus, technology like Meteors we have here, are far beyond my imagination over there. It appears that the knowledge there is far further developed than that I can image. I haven't seen technology what so ever, other than some artifacts that Flugel and Contessa left behind. So, it's highly possible that they used some kind of technological phenomenon to connect worlds, and use it as transportation."
It was apparent to her that this man cared not for the laws of man, he had disregarded her identity entirely but with the power he possessed could anyone refute him.
"Give it up you are surrounded" hearing the voice of one of the people who betrayed me, my thoughts go rigid for a moment i cant believe i let my guard down like this. "Pathetic to say the least i cant believe this is the legendary ___________, how far you have fallen". Another one of my enemies and pursuers spite me and make fun of me what can i possibly do, i'm completely surrounded. "HAND OF THE _______ OF _______ AND YOU WILL LIVE." Live ? is that even an option anymore, dammit i cant die now, i slowly get up, my body covered with blood and dirt. My suit is all ruined dammit i really liked it, i... don't have a choice now do I. "If you bastards what the ________ of ________ the come and get it over my cold dead corpse" I begin my magical chant, a chant i vowed never to use again but now its a must. "My body is my own and none shall stop me". Such a simple chant send my pursuers into a frenzy "Quick stop me before he can finish activating his magic". Sorry _________ its already started, I active my ___________ a power a vowed to let it lay dormant.
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