It’s my first time being interested in an unrated story, so I will give it my first ever review, I think it deserves it.I have been lurking on this new story for the last 2 days and I am glad I did so far. The first few chapters were slow in pace but the interactions between characters and the world building kept me around. But by chapter 4-5 it really did it for me, the tension, the pace and the few mysteries here and there made me want to see how this story will turn out.Good: Author’s world seems really original and interesting. I do like my system action stories, but it’s refreshing to have something else at times. I also like MC and his background, his actions and emotions feel right and appropriate to his age. I also like that the other characters also got a clear identity and voice. Bad: The writing at times got some weakness that made a few chapters long to read. I would recommend to get more to the point when it comes to describing actions and feelings. Webnovels isn’t for slow readers. But the last two chapters (12-13) really give me hope that author will get better and better.That’s all, wishing author and this story the best!

Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐⭐⭐ Now that I just wrote a review for a book I didn't like, it is time to write one for a book I like. No / minor spoilers ahead. Wiriting Quality: The book has a nice flow, and the quality is really good. Stability of Updates: With two chapters a day, the update schedule is quite good. Although, I wouldn't mind 20 chapters a day, considering I devoured all 80 chapters in just two days! Story Development: The story is progressing well and stands out as one of the better novels in its genre. Character Design: This is where the novel truly shines. The MC is well-developed, and the side characters are given sufficient attention. The MC thinks things through before acting, which is a relief as I hate stupid MCs. World Background: Everything is explained just right, not too much not too little. I could write some more about how MC does this and that. But that would take away from you just reading it for yoursel

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THANK YOULOVE IT, love it sooooooo much. Please make more, when or if you can of course.It's a shame it's a bit short as it's one of my favorites.

wow, I actually like how this story is unique and how the protagonist is a cocky guy with a really funny personality. This story is great. Actually, just work on it more still has great potential to be one of the best novels

fantastic and interesting with visual effect. .

As an author, I’m impressed by this novel. The way you’ve created a small, isolated town with its haunting steel bridge and eerie atmosphere is brilliantly unsettling. It immediately draws the reader in, establishing a sense of foreboding that builds throughout the story.Shouichi is a well-crafted protagonist, and his internal struggle with grief and the slow unraveling of his sanity feels incredibly real. The tension between his everyday life and the strange occurrences he faces keeps the reader on edge, wondering whether he’s losing his mind or confronting something far darker.I also appreciate the way you’ve woven in the romantic subplot, which provides a brief moment of light before the growing sense of dread takes over — it adds a nice emotional layer to Shouichi’s journey.Overall, this novel is a captivating psychological horror that masterfully balances character development with suspense. It’s a compelling read that keeps you guessing, and I can’t wait to see how it all unfolds. Excellent work.

This novel has a great, planned world building and interesting premise that can hook the reader from the very first chapter. Written quality is good as well and prose is great and easily digestible.

I'm not into romance novels as I lean more towards fantasy, however this novel was actually really good. I think the pacing for the first part was very fast, but after reading until Chapter 5, the pacing starts to steady itself.The characters were all great and are consistent. Author uses great choice of words that makes me feel immersed in her writing. Keep up the good work!

Wtf. There is being dense and then there’s an eq of -♾️. The whole story is cringe tropes and being dense and weird absolutely bizarre character choices.

This is my first time reading a psychological story and it's good. I liked how the story took a different turn from the second chapter keeping the suspense about what could’ve happened after the monster appeared. I'm waiting for more chapters hope it'll be updated soon.

This right here is a great novel, So far the story is going smoothly, what struck me the most is the pacing of the story, it's really great. 🎉😍