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Some people might think that withholding information from the reader, in what it feels like every chapter, is interesting and gives a sense of mystery. Although the author explains some things in a chapter there are always more things that are left unexplained. I think its nice in the first 30-40 chapters but after that it ends up tiresome and boring and that, imo , hurts the novel which seems to have great potential.

Hello, Author here!I've officially finished a whole volume and now, I can tell you a bit about the story and say things that I wish for the future.1: The main character is a teenage boy who suddenly (re)gained powers. He doesn't know much about the world of superhumans; Streia.2: The first volume isn't too well done since it was my first time writing a whole volume like this, I'll be sure to make the future volumes better. [Skip Exodia 23 - 26 since I believe they have plot holes. And they're also badly written. It's a flashback, so don't worry.]3: This is of the harem genre but the harem won't officially start until either after or during Volume 3. I can say this with 100% certainty.4: I'm a selfish author. I may add in things that I believe are cool or that I believe the readers will find interesting.5: I write to please myself but also since I enjoy it. I get happy when I see more and more reading my book.Please, enjoy my book!P.S. I'm a selfish author, that's why I'm giving myself 5 stars.

Hi wanderers, this is my 2nd time to make a novel and this is my first time to make in webnovel. I hope you like this novel and keep supporting me cause I won't let you down. Have a nice day wanderers and keep safe.

I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father.This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!

"Mmm.. This Prince had to return to the palace before coming here. Pardon this Prince for being late."

The others found make shift weapons and stood on either side of the door while Sam yanked it open.

I take off in the direction of the screams seeing 2 elegant figures running from 2 beasts. I shouted towards the two fine ladies urging them to come over here as it's safe. They looked reluctant but hurried over anyways.

In his face his expression was cold without emotion but only he knew everything he suffered until this moment, everything that he experienced all that he felt at that moment was only despair, despair of not having avoided this ending and he could only scream at the heavens as if someone was watching everything.