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Nice story and plot, I like the way you describe the story. Keep good working, Thor

When I look at video games novels I think of entertaining and exhilarating things. This story starts off nicely, setting a good tone for the story. Not much info dump, but we still get to learn a thing or two about the protagonist. The writing style is good, with well-chosen words and expressions. So far it was really enjoyable. Keep up the good work! <333

honestly probably my favorite novel on the site at the moment. As this novel is essentially coming from a researcher point of view while also running as a cultivation novel, I only have two regrets with this novel and that is the lack of personal action Robin has seen so far, which in hindsight is understandable considering how weak he technically is when talking about only cultivation level. and my other regret is that one chapter just isn't enough for me since the novel is so good 👍.

I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish.  Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential.It failed to live up to any of that.  World building was haphazard in those places it did exist.  Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time.  Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!!The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time.  It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution.Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is.  This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on.On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning.He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example).  This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.

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A very good read really enjoying it the quirky lead with a tsukkomi system. The author put a lot of thought into the story, characters and the world. The pace of the story is good and the took care in portraying the personalities of everyone from siscon yandere? Brother to psychopathic step sister I think you will enjoy them all .