This has potential of becoming population it's masterpiece 👍

This is one of those books that make you a little sad when it ends because you kept wanting more.Excellent and engaging writing. Especially character depictions shine.

Love the starting point and the way how the flaw and world building goes. Just on chapter 1 a bit slow pacing but if you are a person with good patience, surely you can get a hang of it, especially when the story is well written. That, being said this novel have a great potential with a slight improvement on punctuation, and paragraph placing, with slight tweaks. Everything will be smooth to go. I can see how hard the author create chapters to the story, as it was crafted with care, keep up the great work, author! To more ink!

This is absolutely fantastic! I'm blown away by the quality and performance. Everything exceeded my expectations, and I couldn't be happier with my experience. From start to finish, it was seamless and enjoyable.

i am really hooked on this novel so far i hope you continue and don't drop.also will you create a discord for pictures and staff

good novel welled enjoy  🌻🌻🎉🎉🎉🎉❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Overall good start with great potential some dialogues feel cliche though but its pretty interesting and unique, lets see where it goes in future.

This had some potential but author screwed it up with a completely nonsensical magic system and world building that suffered because of it.

best light novel, everyone must read this.

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its a really nice read with a great storyline i am waiting for the next chapter!!!!! pls upload soon! i really enjoyed the story and the first chapter keeps u hooked throughout

Idk I just saw there’s a cool title so I clicked on it