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JBFIRE77x3H
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The general plot idea of this chapter isn't too bad, though the writing quality could really use some improvements. Currently I'm waiting for the next update, and things are bound to get interesting. The development of the story is a but abrupt, and a lot of things could be tweaked to make each scene a lot more realistic, and lengthen the overall word count. The characters aren't too well introduced, and the description of the scenes lack action and impact. World backround is quite plenty though. Overall, it has potential in itself, just some extra effort.
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I have read up to the paywall at ch 21. This is a really well written story about a dude who try’s to avoid all cliches that exist in cultivation novels because he accepts his role as a side character. I personally really like it and it reminds me of another favorite of mine, “cultivation nerd”.
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this is a very entertaining novel but the lack of world information makes it less entertaining
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A good read...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I cant take anymore. Read 20 Chs and puked blood. The events and things that happens are often forced. And the Cringe level is infinite.Pls somebody tell if story improves later on or else I am dropping it.
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As the author of "I Will Save the Villain to Save Myself," I am immensely proud to present this story to readers, and I am confident that it will leave a lasting impression on all who embark on this extraordinary journey of redemption and self-discovery. This story is a masterful blend of fantasy, adventure, and introspection. It captivates readers with its well-crafted characters, imaginative world-building, and thought-provoking themes.- Laceryn
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It's decent. Such novels aren't my forte, but I can review it from a relatively neutral perspective. It's only 21 (very short) chapters in, and nothing major has happened, so it's difficult to judge the story progression.The characters and their interactions seem a bit awkward and wooden, but again only 21 chaps, maybe it will be rectified in future chapters.Spelling mistakes only last for the first chapter and synopsis (fix pls), and after that, I think the author began using some grammar correction tool, so that's fine. Formatting is mediocre, but improving. From here on out, it's a personal opinion of mine that has no impact on my review rating.It feels like a Wattpad novel being expanded to fit Webnovel. Especially the 'romance' part. MC is a bit of a coward, but it's fine to read (for now).
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New book.... pls check it out. Ill really appreciate your support. Let me know about your views of the characters. Together we can explore a world of creation fun and ecstasy. PS: 18+ muah
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one more good collection among trash novels... pacing, story and characters are all good.... hoping for a mass release
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I just started reading the story and I'm loving it already from the Prologue 🥹I like the authors writing style a lot as it brings the story to live as you read it.
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fantastik book writer Emad Sadiq is the best
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Secrets of the Billionaire's Heart best novel i have ever readhighly recomended really engaging captivating and suspensfullsuch a fabulous writer just want to keep all for myself
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