It's a Good story. But the author can make it more dark. My honest Thought

this is really good. I love the storyline and character development Good work                                                                          

I don't want to see her get hurt 💁🏾u200d♀️but I'm still gonna read it 🥲I hope it has a happy ending at least 🥹💓good story.

I must say it's a pretty decent novel, with a relatable MC (I LOVE THE DAMN MC😅🌹). I had a few laughs from reading this and was quite impressed with the writing style.My only problem is the length of the chapters, for a webnovel its's too long and some times staring at all those words I'm yet to read becomes a bore.Nonetheless I'm I love with this novel. The MC is basically me, and for that i love it!.I'd advise any passerbys to ignore the flaws(if there's any) and give this damn novel a try.

This is a great book . I fancy it a lot. Author hs done a beautiful job here

I have great expectations for this novel, it was definitely inspired by different stories and each fragments of those tales are combed nicely into this fiction. It genuinely, in my opinion, pays respect to these pre-existing stories, and it's just soooo great!!Please continue to be inspired! And inspire... This story interests me and I want to know what happens next!

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Just a short story, yet so captivating. Try it out and let me know what you think 😊💙Yours__ the Blue Lady💙

This is a overall good novel .  story is also good you can give it a try ☺️☺️

Speaking of being trapped in a game, it reminds me of SAO, okay, forget about that, your story is really good man, I'm a little curious about the Kasil Hale entity, I'll read more later, but keep fighting buddy.

The adventure is fun of thrill, narrative is well-written and engaging! Overall this novel is definitely a fun and quick read! Only problem is it's still new, thus it's gon' b quite fresh! That's the upsize. Can't wait for more chapters and see what the story has in store for us!

Its alright. Don't mind reading it everyday