This is so damn good, a very refreshing storyline too, the MC isnt a complete cuck nor OP asf just a regular dude with PTSD it seems, idk ive read to ch 34 so far
Bern's story isn't bad, but her character is flawed and those flaws aren't being resolved yet. Looks like Ella is gonna be part of that development.
Meanwhile, you can't just focus on the core 4 characters and forget all the rest. I doubt the author have that much interesting stuff hidden in each of their story to make it last - you need supporting characters to carry the story. Bern's side story focus can be a decent arc depending on how the 4 get slotted in.
That said, story writing doesn't seem to be this author's forte. Let's see...
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Meanwhile, you can't just focus on the core 4 characters and forget all the rest. I doubt the author have that much interesting stuff hidden in each of their story to make it last - you need supporting characters to carry the story. Bern's side story focus can be a decent arc depending on how the 4 get slotted in.
That said, story writing doesn't seem to be this author's forte. Let's see...
Next are these 2 stronger looking ones.
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