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CarlQuinteroVlJ
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if you drop this then you are............π
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overall 4 stars from me!, it's been interesting story the world building and how the system works, also as an exchange of the gifts there's consequences ... i like the consequences part!π₯π₯keep going Author!
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Hello! Shameless author here! I was inspired to write this story when my son mentioned being afraid monsters might come. I promised him I would beat them up for him, but then I realized: I would be totally screwed if that actually happened! So I started writing π. I spent a long time, planning, editing, and reviewing before release, so I look forward to sharing this story with everyone! Still, your feedback is valuable, both positive and negative, so feel free to leave reviews, comments, and if youβre really liking the story, a power stone or two? No? Thatβs ok too π
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Wow! I don't get where the author was going with this prologue.But the scale of story and power levels is insane.I don't know if I am to pity their fates or say they deserved it.Everything is a scheme. I don't know if it's a good thing or bad. So far it's perfect, I guess.And a protagonist creating his own rediculously OP System?This story is definitely not for light hearted audiences.Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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While this novel offers a fascinating mix of advanced technology and magic, it doesnβt always balance the two seamlessly. The world-building is impressive, but some aspects feel underdeveloped, and the pacing can be inconsistent. That said, if you enjoy fantasy blended with mechs and space-faring sci-fi, itβs still worth checking out. It may not be perfect, but it delivers an entertaining ride.
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Hello, I am creating a writers first platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and contests at my webpage -> (Zen ithnovels.com), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. There are no contracts involved and writers maintain full ownership and control of their stories. I hope to see you there!
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The book is good but it hasn't been updated in months π. Whyyyyyyyy?Please update it so that I can read, okay?It's taken so long πππππππ Author please don't disappoint me, it's my favorite story so far
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This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
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Author should make a Patreon with a couple of each of their novels chaps in advance. I bet youβd make a decent amount from $3 a month, or at least I can guarantee $3 a month
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Loved this Iβm obsessed!! 100/10 could not put down
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Very interesting!! I was hooked. The plot was very diverse and beautiful, definitely one of the most unique books Iβve read. The fact that the author used fae instead of the usual vampires and wear wolves was thought grabbing. Good work!
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