Best hip hop story here pls dont stop writing this.                                                                                                               

Violet’s trauma is being handled so well. The pacing of her mental breakdown feels realistic. She’s strong, but not immune—and that makes her feel real.

Really good novel. slow paced and the girls has start of pretty good. This novel has a lot of potential............Good luck author with your WSA

The book hasn’t gone far but it got me anticipating for more chapters already.

This novel is very similar to Greatest of all Time. However, that novel is one of my favorite sports novel so I hope your translation does it justice.

Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?

The story is good pulling you in easily. Easy to understand. I also like the pacing. The power of the MC is unique and not OP. Characters have life and are not just 2D much better than some other junk on this site. This is my first time giving a review here. I suggest you to read this.

Its very interesting and captivating basing on the introduction and involvement of the characters which is marvellous..........................................................................

It's really incredible, just 4 chapters in and I liked it a lot, although the prologue needs improvement.

Aight, Young Sosa on the review h o *.Before I start, I'll clarify things a bit. I seldom review novels, finding it a hassle to do so. So if I am reviewing a novel, then yall should already get its a good novel.There's no glaze involved. Okay maybe a little, it's a review for my homie after all. But don't worry I won't unnecessarily and blindly just give everything a 5 star without any reasons.My position as a moderator of this novel has nothing to do with the review of this novel. Maybe with the author's feet? Yes.Anyways, I'll start to not make this hopefully long for yall and you spamming me 'I ain't reading allat.' Just read PTSD at the end for an overview, yes I'm still high so I don't remember what it's called. Whatever it is.Let's start shall we. First, I'll give an overview on what this thing is and who the japanese jav idol, I mean author is.KRISPY KREME DONUTS, WE GLAZIN'After Extra's Dysfunction, yes that's what ED stands for, this japanese idol has released a new novel, shifting the brand-on to a new story (Get it? I'm sorry, that was a terrible joke I know.)This story is about a Mustard (Yes I got my goat Kendrick on loop and you know what I wanted to say here as well) who's an instructor at an academy. It's basically similar to Akashic Records of a Mustard Instructor.So if you love it, just you got enough of a reason to read it already. I can't explain more cause the amount of japanese genes author used on this novel would flag this review if I described them in detail.Aight now we move to different aspects of this mustard novel.Writing Quality.Ngl gonna lie, compared to the other novels author wrote, especially ED. The writing quality was one of the major improvements.As the first reader of ED (Yes, it's not a joke. And yes it's a brag), I have seen this jav professional improve step by step. The fighting scenes, the conversations, the dialogues, the foreshadowings.Everything. If you aren't blind, even you can notice this all. You will gradually see everything get better if you start from ED and end up at this novel. So yeah, I really got nothing to complain about Writing Quality.In fact, I'll state this here, his writing style, I actually found so efficient and good that I tried copying it into my style because I tended to write overly descriptive. Just saying this here to say, that in my humble opinion, I love the quality and style.Of course, if it doesn't apply to you then... I don't know, just rephrase it in your mind.Stability of Updates:Sigh, alright here, I got a problem with author. No, it's not a problem for everyone but me personal.The stability, of course if you saw my review of ED is peak. Never seen this guy update 1 chap/per day fr for real unlike other 70% of webnovel authors that do it. He's consistent and the chapters are also of quality.So in the matters of Stability, I assure you, you ain't got anything to worry bout. This door hinge guy is pretty good in maintaining his update rate so yeah, 5.He also uploads sometimes 4 and 3 time to time for free so even better.However, here is the problem. This korean-wannabe has a stack of 100 chapters for this novel.But, spending time in the community of indians has turned this guy into a scammer. Ngl gonna lie author, you better hide before you hear the sound of ticking under your chair.Better upload all those stack chaps and bonus chaps of castles, or all you hearin is BAN* BAN*. Yes, I'm Pakistani. What did you expect?Story Development:Peak. Yes, Peak. This is one of the things that this author improved a lot in. From simple cliche plots of ED to peak foreshadowings and deep plotlines, he went far and beyond in this aspect.I am truly not glazing here. You can see for yourself in this novel.Just the first ARC ITSELF, would make you addicted to this novel like it was a ****. I'm already high so I don't think I'd surv*** tbh be honest.The way it unfolds and reveals along with every aspect of the story is definitely an amazing ability of the author.So, yeah, a 5.Character Design:Again, a definite peak.The novel definitely separates itself from the rest of the novels by not just stating the personality of characters outright and showing it through dialogues and their actions instead.Despite the main character, who's name, yes, is taken from VNK no Karte with the name Vanitas Jacques Bermon Webster II.There's also the sister, whom just like ED, despite having a massive fanbase is absolutely hated by me for acting like a character from character.c.ai. Author, you should definitely **** her. (Yes, the k word not the f word. Stop your minds)But nevertheless, the character design is peak. Me not like his sister, is just my own skill issue.The author still defines and writes their personalities in a unique and loving way.Last aspect, World Background: (If you getting tired, go get a shot of Sprite, yeah don't worry, I'll wait here for you.)Sike, I'm moving on. Ha ha ha. guak guak guak. (I'm eating something not what you think.)Anyways, this is also a 5. (I can glaze this for hours but I know you guys are getting tired and want to go back to spicychat so just stick with me, okay)This is also cut out from the rest of the cliche novels with a very expansive background with a deep lore. Especially since it's a professor novel, the author explains and expands on it very much.This aspect alone gives it an edge above most of the att- i mean novels out there. There are towers, kingdoms and much more.Not only that, but despite it being so much, the author reveals it so well and with such a good rate that it doesn't feel like an info dump at all. Just trust me on this.At the end, PTSD:It's peak, yeah, just go try it. Trust me, you'll love it. Every aspect of this novel is so good that you won't regret it.Author has planned this for such a long long long time (2 days) as well that you won't notice any plotholes (holes that ever forced an author to rewrite their entire novel, ha ha ha). In any case, I promise you won't regret it. If you do, well skill issue. What? Did you expect some sort of compensation?Sike, I got indian and Pakistani genes in me bros. Ha ha ha. :tsulaugh:ANYWAYS, GO READ.METROOOOOOOOO!!

It’s rare for authors to produce such a high-quality chapter early in their journey, which truly showcases your talent and dedication. If you keep up this level of excellence, there’s no doubt you’ll make a name for yourself in the world of writing. Keep pushing forward—you’re on the right track!

Story is getting better. Please write more