D. Eaters

Now THIS is a great story. I feel like the tense is a little... off putting however. “He walks away” “he walked away”. the second sounds better right? I feel like this story is an amazing plot, The characters feel so real, The world design is great. however i feel like it would have worked better in past tense format. but who knows, This is just my opinion. very good :)

If you want to constantly scream at the screen, then go ahead and read it, otherwise stay as far away as you possibly can.The main character is a complete waste of word.He is the stupidest character you have ever seen and will ever see!Like seriously, if you were to animate a brick, it would make better life decisions than the MC can ever hope  make.He plans to lay low but goes to clear dungeons within minutes in broad daylight.He think he is weak but instead of improving himself he sells all of the stuff that can make him stronger for money. Basically think of the most logical way to solve a problem, and then do the exact opposite. That how our MC fares.He is a spit to the face and a kick to the ass for readers(you will also get charged for it).If you can turn off your logical brain, then you can enjoy this one quite well, as the idea of it is quite interesting.

the grammar is good and it's easy to keep up with who's speaking and all, but there's just too much going on. It's like it's just this weird almagation of a bunch of different stories and things that are from completely different universes. like you just throw whatever comes to mind in it.

very very familiar story. although it appears so late, the storyline is worthy. well, i have read it long time ago and accompanied my youth.

Hey! I'm the translator, Shiraishi. Since I'm also limited to 140 characters, I'll only say this. I hope you enjoy the story, and if you have any issue, don't hesitate to leave a comment.

OMG is this an actual unique pilot read impossible. I'm going through shock there actually exists a pilot read that isn't just copy and paste.

Did a quick review nice one...everything seems nice...also the character development and writing quality.....Keep it up....also pretty old fashioned but nice concept....

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