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Jeri_
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- July 1,2024
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This story was recommended to me by a friend. and i got hooked immediately when i began to read it. can't wait for more chapters to release🥰🥰🥰
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alright this here just reminded of so many tragic video games and stories like damn the first chapter already got you wondering what the hell is gonna play next even word play got me hooked ....author keep cooking
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I like the overall goal of the novel, it's got the classic anime I just want money and women hero which is pretty interesting and neat can't wait for more 😊
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Carter may be haunted by the past spoiler alert he will be don´t know what you guys think but i think that this is just the starting of something else let me know what you think in the comment section
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This is really a solid novel and a very unique interpretation of a System as a whole. The novel doesn't have some sort of linear Level Ups at all, its straight up copy of danmachi leveling without the statestics part. So Mc needs to do feats to grow and unlock more of his DLC powers. Mc is a child so expect slow progression with romance and harem, while you can clearly see who will be harem members with the way mc and his interaction with others are portrayed in the chapters.The scope of the verse and power level is ludacrisly high without using excessive power scaling jargon names you often find in other power fantasy novels. This is not that type of novel. The scope of the verse itself seems very secondary as mc's main motive is just to become a harem protagonist, thats all.
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can you stop with all of the inner monologue its dragging down a story and it takes too long on one part of the story
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Keep It Up, One day you will achive your success
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it's decent but the biggest issue Is locking chapters at chapter 14 that's a crazy move that i am completely against because 14 chapters is not enough of a sample size for a story you can't really tell if you're going to like it or not and it just seems so greedy to lock chapters so early.
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MC is a God's son. His Guardian knows this, yet she's stomping all over him, and he lets her! Yeah, he's only just born, but my goodness! after I was done with my 15 mins for a free FP I quit! Horrible!
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Please tell about how you like novel in comment or suggest anything about it appreciate it
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Its Such a well crafted story, the pacing is unbelievably good and the main character is really enjoyable to read... some of the characters are absolutely well written and the world building is also on point 10/10 keep going!!
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So far it is a really good start and I'm looking forward to the next chapters 🙂
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