Immortality Starts With Investment

Awesome book, however I paid for continued chapters, I'm only getting 4 chapters at a time now... If this is an error, please fix it so I'm not locked for the rest of the chapters... Grrrr

I just finished reading all 11 chapters. The storyline is fascinating and you have a unique style of writing. Your grammar and punctuation is all on point. I will love to read more....

The writing style is direct, and the story has a fast-paced rythm. The author does not spin around the matter and goes straight to the point from the very start. The plot has potential and is very appropriate for the genre, although some events ocurr in a hasty way. A pity that some sentences were left in the past tense, but it's still worth it.

Es muy bueno la Historia, sin duda el MC se mantiene fiel a su Rol de Villano de segunda y su personalidad se mantiene en su mente bien centrado y no pensar con la cabeza de abajo o el estúpido del corazón y sus emociones y sentimientos sobre el mundo donde habita se manteniendo fiel y al parecer no se podra cambiar(lo cual es bueno...despues de todo lo que le hicieron)(Muchos autores que hacen este tipo de historias deberian aprender de esta trama siendo sincero xd) y el desarrollo de MC es muy bien desarrollado, pueden verlo como el clasico ingenuo a mitad de la historia, pero todo gira a 180 grados a medida que avanza la historia de cuan cruel, frio y indiferente en realidad lo convirtió el mundo novedoso, La Heroines al menos tienen vergüenza de sus actos lo cual es muy bueno para su desarrollo, Solo faltaria escenas del Delicioso y sin duda seria 10/10

This novel has the usual plus point of the author which is the characters he create and the feelings they express. The negative of this novel is that the world building of this novel is a complete mess and the translator's translation quality is a bit lacking.

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The story is good and interesting, but mr author why do you have the same book twice the era of evolution  and the new world are the same? And what your upload schedule?

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