You've built the world in the story quite well. I don't know how the upcoming content will be, but Jonas' world-building is pretty solid. However, I think if you do the same for the remaining 24 characters, it might take quite a bit of time. There are a few holes, but they’re not significant. Respect for the effort you’ve put into your story.

shamwelessauthor is here just enjoy the story I am planning good chapters on it if you had any ideas just tell me 19 chapters until now will try to post 5 chapters daily

Wow 😲 Amazing and interesting I just love everything about it I'm already hook from the first chapter

This story definitely has some potential.You should make the world building more mysterious and don't info dump. The world should unravel slowly

Nice...nice.nice..this is my first novel.good writing.and nice story i like that..goooooooood and niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii'ii'iiiiiiicccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Ask any questions you may have about the book here. Expect two chapters a day for updates, each around ~1k. As for the expected book length, I'm not sure, but it'll be more than 300 chapters.

The transimigration is well timed. Zan seems to be a an Intriguing character, and this mysterious man, shows an unseen development that will unfold later.  This story is good 👍

Got me glued from the start...Can't wait for the rest

A great read, "Dragon Slayer

The demon king Baldwin is so fun! an epic fantasy webnovel that will grip you from beginning to end! Baldwin, the Demon King, is a fascinating character who breaks the mold. The plot weaves a web of mistery, battles, and all in a rich and well-crafted plot. The writing is immersive and transports you into the story. Highly recommended for fantasy fans who love overpowered leads.

So far it’s a great book, came here for this author, he’s the first one I read on Webnovel and I’m still enjoying his works

Another shitty cliché novel where the protagonist is someone with no talent, so that later for different reasons he obtains it, surprising others. The authors really have no imagination, it's always the same shitty plot.