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elensar
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Greetings, dear readers!It is a great honor for me that you have checked out my title! Please, don’t hit me with sticks for any mistakes you might come across—whether grammatical or plot-related. I’m not a professional writer, and this isn’t my main occupation, but as they say, why not give it a shot?This is my first work, so if my storytelling style annoys you, I apologize in advance. I still have a lot to learn and need to gain experience. However, with each chapter, I make progress—or at least, I try to.Give it a read if you find it interesting! And if not... well, read it anyway)
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So far so good!👍 I wish there were more chapters so I could binge read it! Keep it coming author. Is his sister going to be alone of the girls he goes after?
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The world feels enchanting, the characters are coming to life, and I'm already drawn into the unfolding adventure. An enticing start that promises a fantastic journey ahead!
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Shows a lot of promise. Here for a long time I hope.
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I was recommended this book just today and I'm almost halfway through the posted chapters and all I can say is wow,I've not encountered any error and the pace and character development is great
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This novel / fanfic is average. Starting is not good with world building and very slow pace but he is trying to make it better in later half.This is story for those who like to explore different types of Pokemon worlds , especially in the old era. I have read some really great ones sadly they stopped releasing for some reason.You can skip some chapters also if you find too slow pacing will not make any impact in the story that much for earlier chapters.Author should rewrite them if he gets time.Release is also slow as if he works for 5 days a week.Author should like this review if you are reading it.
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Love necromancer stories. This looks like it will scratch that itch. Crappy family- check. purposeless life- check. OP job from the get-go? -check. Let's Rock!
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The concept is absolutely beautiful. I can't comment on the execution yet but the power system and abilities are wonderful. Keep up the good work author, I think this book will go quite far.
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OH WOW!! What a fun new story I’ve found. It immediately grabs you and the English is very good. And what a combination!! Transmigration, interstellar landscape, cool mechas & AI, spatial pocket, werewolf mate, missing memories, unknown abilities, I’m so sad that I have to stop reading because I can’t afford the privileged chapters 😅. It’s also listed as R18 but I haven’t seen any of that yet… so I’m eagerly awaiting that part too!! I just saw that the author may not continue due to an accident/health reasons and that is very sad news. Thank you Author, for your hard work so far, it’s much appreciated.
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Gostei muito uma história muito completa muito quente e erótica recomendo a leitura muito bom 🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥
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The author really knows how to capture emotions, creating vivid descriptions that brings the scene to life. Only seen up to 3 chapters but what I have seen is great so far. Will surely add this novel to my library.
The Billionaire’s Enchanting Wife