The Loom of Beginning and End

It's alright not really that good but i liked it

Really poor grammar. I don't really know if it will improve in the future but my head currently hurts after trying to make sense of this damned thing.

this isint an original novel and it costs gems to read despite using other games and entertainment this is not an original and theyre making money out of it i want them to copyright this so bad, The idea is also similar to "only i know the plot"

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This Poke-Master Syndrome novel is worse than last weeks. OP MC that gets everything he needs with no effort or even solid explanation. You could make a cliche checklist and this would check off all of them. The Author is super lazy and this seems like their own power fantasy written down.Dont waste your time on this as there is zero originality.Translation quality is good.I give it 1 raging dumpster fire.

Very good premise, and the story started out strong. As it goes, however, the story becomes extremely frustrating to read. The main character's decisions seem forced and pretty obviously non-optimal given the information provided. Not to mention weird inclusion of a gun that seemed extremely out of place and forced for no reason. Also, every character besides the MC seems to be omniscient, as they either already have all the MCs info, or gain it nearly immediately. MC seems to simultaneously have amazing cheats and yet remain infuriatingly underpowered despite obvious methods of powering up. Dropped bc it legit made my blood pressure go up. I wanted to like it so badly, but I just couldn't. Huge disappointment.

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understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least.the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist.Author does update steadily.the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain.as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.