It's not a bad plot. Not consistent in terms of plot, especially when transitioning every chapter. Also, the whole Man City plot is straight-up dumb. Instead of selling his stock, he kept it so he could be a beta cuck who get his opinion rejected. Like seriously dumb. Mc acts like he wanna buy a club but can't due to his sellable stock at Man City. Easy solution, sell it, too bad Mc and author give dumb excuses to not sell the stock. I get Mc not buying Watford, but Mc not buying Man U is just dumb especially since he knew when Man U was brought. That was just some of the issues.

could get you addicted in the first few chapters. nice work

"When the Biggest Enemy of a Story Is Its Own Author"Reading this novel was a frustrating experience, not so much because of the story itself, but because of the author's attitude. The plot has potential, but the execution leaves much to be desired. Not because there's a lack of information, but because what is given is disorganized and poorly presented. A story should allow readers to understand its world without the author having to step into the comments section to provide impromptu explanations.I tried to express a legitimate doubt about the worldbuilding—because yes, if a random bandit has the same cultivation level as the protagonist, it's reasonable to question how strong his family really is—and instead of a clear response, I received a series of defensive, condescending, and completely unnecessary replies. The author seems to assume that if something was mentioned in a previous chapter, then any question about it is automatically invalid. As if it's the reader's fault for not memorizing every scattered detail across different chapters.But the most striking issue is the author's stance on criticism. Instead of taking the time to improve the storytelling or even acknowledging that perhaps the exposition isn't the best, they respond with an attitude that oscillates between disdain and outright denial of any possible flaw in their work. To them, if you didn’t understand something, it’s your problem. If something doesn’t make sense, it’s because "you're not thinking logically." And if you dare to ask, you might as well stop reading.It's a shame because there are interesting ideas here, but the author seems more interested in arguing with readers than in making the story more accessible. A novel should be able to stand on its own without needing the author to drop into the comments, giving explanations as if they were footnotes.If you enjoy stories where every legitimate question is met with passive-aggressive responses and the narrative demands infinite patience to connect dots the author couldn’t be bothered to structure properly, go ahead. But if you're looking for a story that explains itself without needing clarifications, you’re better off elsewhere.

Oh, the story was really interesting. I hope you keep up the good work for this story. It's already great. I can feel the emotion you're trying to convey on each and every words.

This novel is worth reading I advise don't scroll pass it.

This is a great story with each chapter getting more and more interesting.  Keep up the good work.

The start is interesting, one of few i cause say that stand out, good pacing, immersion is dangerous I almost finished all the uploaded chapters in one sitting

Intriguing book. I love that it's taking on a More realistic and relatable note while then adding things of the supernatural. I love the narrative, the characterization is peak and the descriptions of the city, the place they live and family life. I will definitely continue reading this.

I'm not expecting anything less from this author! All her books are so inspiring and beautifully written!

Magnificooooooo.I'm no expert in opinions but if I have to give one I'd say go for it without hesitation you won't be disappointed !!!!Author don't be a fool to abandon it or spoil it you understand ???

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Not to brag but I think this novel is pretty good. Read it if you want to read a story about a guy who is somewhat forced to steal the female protagonists away from MCs of different novels that occurs in that world while also having to defeat the villains of those stories as well.