Have already collected this. Such an amazing story, jealous of the details placed on the world building, great character names especially Mirabelle and plot twists worthy of swiping up to continue.

story development can be better, can have more depth in character building and it's  makes better quality story.

Good story. Writing's great as well. Love the first person narrative style too. 👌Added to library

Surprisingly well written and suprise of surprises, well edited.  So far, cliche, but sufficiently well played clichés that I am willing to keep reading, hoping for a well turned phrase or a startling conceit.  8/10 so far.  I will observe author-kun's efforts with great interest.  Suprise me!

The plot is very unique, the story building is not so fast nor slow. Just so-so. I wanna give it some time to progress even more. Thanks, Author!

good, good stories. Good characters. That is all

Just the synapses alone is intriguing.  The author clearly has talent.

The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started  showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...

I'm thrilled to get my hands on another masterpiece from my favorite author.🥰🥰I just can't wait to dive in and start reading - I'm beyond excited! Gosh, the synopsis blows me away!

Hello, I am the author of this novel, and I want to share a few things with you:  1. You can ask any questions or share your doubts here or in the chapter comments. I will reply within 5 minutes to a maximum of 3 days, as long as I get a notification ping.  2. If you read the first chapter, please don’t drop the novel. The next part contains some spoilers, so read carefully. The starting chapters are meant to be funny to make readers feel comfortable. Don’t worry, the MC will get back what he lost one day.  3. I am focusing more on quality than quantity. However, my English isn’t perfect yet. I would really appreciate it if you could help by reading slowly and pointing out any mistakes.  4. My goal is to create a great quality novel. I am doing my best to update one chapter every day.  5. Please don’t ask me what might happen in the future because I don’t always know myself. Sometimes, the chapters are inspired by what readers suggest, or by things I’ve seen or read recently. So, even I don’t have the full plan ahead!6. lastly, This is my first time writing a novel, mostly for fun but also to earn a little money along the way. I hope you enjoy the story, and thank you for your support!

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement

Uh hi! First rating ofc, i rated it all max just so IN A SMALL CHANCE THAT people will read it and if AI can write good stories