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GojoVirUue
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Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?
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Well, this is an author here shamelessly reviewing and voting his own book. This right here might turn out to be the biggest book ever written on this platform. You should watch out!If you don't believe, then read for yourself. We might get a movie endorsement on this one lol.Happy reading!!Will be back when this book blows and become famous :)
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Your writing quality is simply outstanding! 🖋️ Every update not only built anticipation but also consistently elevated the story to new heights. 📚 The story development is truly remarkable, weaving characters and plot together in a way that feels seamless and natural. 🌟 The character design is incredibly detailed and realistic, allowing readers to form deep connections and truly care about their journeys. ❤️ The world-building is nothing short of magical, transporting readers to a fantastical realm full of wonder and adventure. 🌍 Your novel is not just a story, but a source of inspiration that ignites the imagination and leaves a lasting impact on all who read it
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It's more of a summary, rushed, unrealistic in some aspects and lacks immersion for the readers.A good break from the overly compensating fillers for other fanfictions.
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I am the invincible snapdragon of a thousand votes, upvote me in my quest to achieve a thousand upvotes!
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Great book so far. Writing is also very good.
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like it so far totally recommended for you all seeking for new type of isekai
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A good story with a solid grasp of bees and other insects' workings. There is one arc I enjoyed less than the others, though. It's just a matter of personal preferences and things are getting serious now, so it's already forgotten. Keep up the good job author and I wish you success. :)
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Oh would you look at that, you usual brain rot title, your usual horny mind cover page. What can you even expect on this site?...What's that? Wait, you mean this novel is good? Oh hell nah............is it?This novel is what I can only assume to be a continuation of OWE, the previous (incomplete) work by Mr. Stache. It follows our usual plot, you have the main character, annnnnnnnnnnd he's dead.Now's he's transmigrating? Oh wow, he's transmigrating into a nearly dead Villain in a novelesque scene. How Original!~Any moment now, we'll hit the regression button and go back to the ver--...Huh. No regression it seems. Instead, what is this, a Soap Opera? Ah... the characters are viewing the past thanks to some holy artifact, and they find out that the man that they put on death's door, the one who they thought of as the most villainous monster in history, he was in actually a soft man!? With a soft heart, that had no choice but to freeze under the assaults of the world. Wow, how sad...I can almost shed a tear...Tears for all the readers that dismiss this story as your usual webnovel bullshit. TL;DR: This novel is a gut-wrentcher that does not hold back on its punches when it slams the waterworks. Go read it, I'm not asking. Zi Long Ling Long Land Verisioness~~~Let's start with some concrete stuff before I start fan-boying. 1. Writing Quality: Top Notch. You hardly find any grammatical error, if any. Sentences? To the point, no BS mode. Obviously, it switches things up when expositions need to take center stage. To illustrate, long time webnovel readers of the modern day, the xianxia and system enthusiasts, the exposition sounds like a mirror. It's fun, humorous, and tries to give everything personality in a place where all you can find are edgelords who wish to see nothing but a similarly edgelord MC with a gazillion wives and strength that slaps people over and over again. It doesn't feel boring, but rather consistent. 8/10Update Schedule: Check the frequency of OWE's updates. You'd expect this new novel to be dead by now no? How surprising it must be, to find that the author hasn't missed a single fucking day since he first began?Let's hope he doesn't go on a long ass smoke break again. 10/10World Building: Take LoTM, but tone it down a few levels, and remove the 60 page exposition of how smooth and buttery the chicken peas are, or how juicy the pork is. Okay, maybe tone LoTM down a few more levels. Whatever it is, it's enough. The author expects you to go through the story and understand shit when needed, so he doesn't bore you with stuff. However, you can see that the world that they live in has history. Now how it develops in the future is not something I can say. For now, 6.3/10. Character Design: Take a character, introduce him/her to the main character, familiarize and build up rapport with the readers, and then kill them off. Textbook formula no?What's hard? Doing all this and executing in such a way that the death HITS.What's harder? Doing all THAT, in less than 90 chapters, TWICE, with a bunch of shit happening in the background. For those that we've gotten to properly experience, all I can say is that they are fleshed out as hell. But for the others who we haven't yet reached, they still live a lil 2D. And the crowd has personality, but not enough. For now, 6+Potential(10)/10Story Development: Twists here, twists there, plot points that make the author seem like a man with a plan (or a smartass, choose your fancysmansy), and wonderful execution to a point. Good shit. The characters act in a way that can be understood. As one 'I'm the second coming of Jesus' would say:Reasonable Development. 8.5/10 (high balling a teeny amount because of potential)..I started fanboying anyway. FUCK. Well, whatever. From what I've heard, the story won't be SS long, but more in the fields of 'it's enough.' Start reading, because no way in hell am I letting myself be the only one suffering due to cliffhangers. (binged the entire shit fortunately, and we're just now entering the new volume, so there's shit to be seen.)Overall rating: 4.6384/5. MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR--
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Hi, my lovely readers! 😼. It's your shameless author here to drop a review concerning this book. So, this book is not your typical fantasy/werewolf book. It has many twists and turns and mysteries... Oooo 🙊.Although this book has a lot of mysteries and some heart-wrecking scenes. It will still have a sweet romance. By sweet romance, I mean obsessive romance 😎. If there are questions you have regarding this book, please feel free to ask. I will answer them. Honest opinions for this book are welcomed! I'm open to your honest criticism. If you're not a fan of this kind of book, please feel free to leave and not leave hurtful reviews or harsh comments (u2060≧u2060▽u2060≦u2060).Finally, I hope everyone enjoys reading this book and developing love for my characters <u2060(u2060 ̄u2060︶u2060 ̄u2060)u2060>.
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An intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Love the dialogue are represented seeing something new. I highly recommend it
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An action hero in a game world is something I haven't seen before and I'm confused how no one has come up with this combination before. The premise aside this story is very well written and the characters are all nicely written too.
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