I always love detective stories. I started reading novel by reading Hardy Boys and 3 Detective Series during my school days! Brought back my memories! Hope to read more! Gonna have fun reading!

you started on the 19th and your already going at full pace we love this can't wait to see what more ideas you got coming for us

Hi there, amazing author! I just finished reading your book, and I must say, it’s fantastic! I wanted to reach out and share a few tips that could help boost the performance and visibility of your book even further

A powerful and suspenseful story! The author has created an intense atmosphere that makes me feel the emotions of the main character. The way he is dealing with his past, his guilt, and his search for identity is beautifully written. I also love the deep conversations. They make you reflect on life.

Very ass story writing I think you need to learn writing all chatgpt . This was the worst story I ever read. Good starting but nothing about charecters

This is nice,I like Alan.And please,we need more chapters .

It is an astonishing story which you must read 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

100000000000000000000000000000000000000000% recommended i liked it so muchyou can read before you sleep

Although there are only 4 chapters so far, I give what I have read 5 star. I would like to see another 20 or so Chapters asap and will be keen to see where this story goes.

A Powerful Story of Loss, Justice, and Revenge. The writing is vivid, and the emotions feel real. This novel explores deep questions: How far would you go for justice? Can revenge truly heal you? If you enjoy stories about loss, redemption, and second chances, this book is a must-read.

so like me, you also write using the first pov narrative... but this style is only meant for story with a nuance of comedy or to be exact, the English words should be casual and entertaining because the one that is speaking is the characters, not the author. Too much description is also a no no to this style.. why? because if you tell a story yourself, you won't yap about everything you saw right? However the content is interesting,, keep it up!!

I can't lie. I knew my GOAT would drop some heat when I was viewing his Tiktok/Youtube content. Cyrus is a peak mc, so keep writing peak gang✌