Into the Secret of Tirlus

best story ever please write more ignore the haters please

Poorly executed plot. Translator leaves much of the chinese language as is without providing explanations to the inside jokes or references that the author makes. This is nothing shot of pure laziness. There's a few specific chapters that involve a cell phone and some texting app, the only problem is that as the reader we have absolutely no clue what's going on. No translator notes, no editor notes, nothing. 5 Chapters of the 34 that I read are completely incomprehensible in relation to the plot because this translator is lazy.Besides that, I did mention that the plot was poorly executed. What I mean by that is that there's little to no segway into the actions the main character makes. Often times the author skips over explanations of situations or such explanations aren't translated well enough for the reader to understand what's happening. This ties into the translator being lazy.Concept wise, it's very interesting. I've read about similar concepts in other novels, but it's original enough to still feel fresh considering the overall bland nature of this genre. This is of course hampered by the lack of explanations from the author or the poorly translated explanations from the lazy translator.Much of the novel is lost in translation. Much of the novel is marketed towards people in China/Korea, it's not really meant for English audiences, I wouldn't be surprised if such people would have difficulty in relating to situations described in the novel.The author is very bad at writing fighting scenes. A lot of the background in such scenes is bland and lackluster with lack of detail. The combat is also poorly described.Overall, a lot is lacking with this novel.

10/10 This novel is a great read, the earlier chapters are pretty misleading for how good it eventually becomes however. The further you get the more entertaining it becomes to read, the mc becomes increasingly more interesting as he hides his true nature behind a guise of arrogance. The overall grammar is pretty great as well, with only a few minor errors here and there. Overall I’d recommend this novel to any fan of transmigration novels.

Important notice!!!I'm Asian who is trying to write in English. There will be mistakes and errors. So bear with me. If you see mistakes, let me know please.***

Everyone. We need to keep putting as many Power Stones into this as possible! I/We need to read the continued exploits of Daneel, King of Lanthanor, Leader of the Alliance, God King of Angaria & World Dominator!!!!

Well the writing quality is good, quite enjoyable...

***** Tuare's PoV, shortly after the party broke into teams *****

Maxine chuckled next to my ear. "Magic is a 'bunch of threads', but most people don't see the actual magic. They feel magic through the energy source, which they perceive through relative movement. There are four basic energies that hominids can perceive: fire, water, air, and earth. Usually a person has an affinity for only one of them. The sources have different characteristics, but the most obvious is the ease of use. Water moves the easiest, so it is most readily available. Earth moves the least, so it is more difficult to use. Fire needs the appropriate catalyst, but after that it's easy enough to keep going. Air requires more control over one's own body."