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Ivan87lUB
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This is a great work👌.I highly recommend
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In short, the main character is a loser, I don't understand how he became a footballer with such a character. He can't stand up for himself, the first time was when they set the conditions that he would need to take an interview, I thought okay, maybe just once, but then when the owner of Manchester City offers a bet, he hesitates for too long. I just don't understand why, if he knows the result, he should have immediately agreed, or raised the bet, or refused altogether, and now because of one share he has to go to Manchester. And finally, how can he not have a plan on how to tell his family. He either should not have talked about buying the buildings at all or there should have been a convincing reason for the purchase. He came with a bag full of documents, without a plan, and then he had a few hours to at least find an excuse and a reason, but he doesn't know what to say, then he barely tells the whole truth, stuttering and starts thinking during the conversation, and then his mother takes all the money he has left. In short, he's an idiot. What kind of weed was the author smoking?
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Really nice vibes with this one.Makes me feel an emotion I can't exactly describe. Although the narration upon narration without a lot of dialogue when I first started reading it is a lot different than what I usually read. I still liked it a lot.Keep on going,I think it has a lot of potential.
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I AM A REAL RYU !! I AM NOT A FAKE RYU !!
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'Ti's nice like very nice need to work hard tho to develop more
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Just a shameless review here. By the way if you got any questions just ask, I am happy to reply.
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The descriptions of the characters' emotions, backgrounds, and surroundings make everything feel very real. The fantasy elements are extremely vivid, and it is easy to become immersed in the story. I also enjoy the author's brief notes at the end of each chapter.
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I really love your book. Please update more! Aria's character is interesting but i wanna read more about Blue
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the chapter' s writing and story is so good that I got addicted now I am craving for more ... author you have to give us new chapters continuously...... please .....and don't drop it from the middle .
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I needed some historical bl novel like demons angel prince and historical vibe.thats genre I love and thanks for creating one . Waiting to see what has to come. That's what type of story I needed . I got one . excited to see what will happen 😁 😉
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It really interesting concept I hope you continue itBecause I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this…...............…...........................
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What kind of demented stuff is on this app nowadays? Take your fetishes somewhere else. Disgusting.
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