“Dear diary, That girl she’s driving me crazy“

Hope to read your next novel in the future.

Love the novel. Obviously smut-oriented so it's gonna be the main focus. Can't wait to see what else you cooking.I personally will stick around until the funny Yandere happens at chapter 200.

I really like this story and the direction it is going but that being said it had a really rough start and you have to push through the first few chapters where the author forces the MC into a really bad situation where he has to dig himself out of it with the help of his best friend. I think this was workable and the story developed nicely but the biggest issue is the constant grammar errors and word choice that makes this book difficult to continue and the reason I dropped it once it went premium. If the author was able to get a proofreader or an editor i think i would pick the story up again! This is just one lousy opinion and I hope the author can keep working the best they can and continue to improve!

si eres alguien que le gustan las cosas un poco raras, esta novela es para ti, te imaginas que una chica se meta en tu pene por tu uretra y se que en tus bolas absorbiendo tus semillas? o tu estas en el útero de una chica jugando por un año entero? lo único malo es que no hay penetración del pezón y nada más, pero es una buena historia si estas aburrido :)) los demás es una basura pero es una cosa buena para los degenerados :3

Decent story. Poor grammar. While the story is engaging, the author seems to have issues with conjugation and keeping consistent with tense usage. For those who may be non-native speakers, or those that can blow past such issues, this is an interesting read. For those who might be grammatically sensitive, this is a bit of a tough read.

I enjoyed the story until around chapter 200. Where the story is essentially about a kid who has a reincarnated soul in his head. They live with each other, fight, make up, etc. The voice in his head teaches him things and casts some spells for him. Either way, the focus is essentially on the kid and his life, while the soul is really pretty much a side character all that time. But around chapter 200 the soul is given the option to kill the kid and take over his body. Which he ends up doing, so what we were led to believe was the supposed MC just gets killed off like that and the soul is now taking over his body and gonna cut ties with people and live differently. I get that the synopsis and first chapter made it seem lile the guy getting reincarnated would be the MC, but he got turned into a soul instead and pretty much made into what I assumed was a permanent side character position. Either way, I'm pretty disappointed with this turn of events, it feels like all that story and character development the kid went through was just thrown away after all that time, and now we get the side character who had like 80% less development as the new MC.

When I feel that it is almost there, I stabbed the spears I prepared in advance into the trap. That is the bamboo after I cut, and sharpened into a simple spear. I placed the tip upwards, and stabbed it into the hole. One after another. Rigidly, one after another.

"Yes mistress"