a great novel with a lot potential. keep up the good work

this is real good. The character development is excellent and the story is progressing so far is good. Keep it up                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

very interesting story highly recommended

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The story is— fast paced, but apart from that, everything thing seem in place, from the world development to the character design. Kudos to you

Amazing world building and characters.This is such a hidden gem

Development of story is quite peciluar but the worse part of this story is cliches and female characters introduction because they are forced and sometimes characters act like they are robot without thought or emotion

This novel sounds like a dark and gripping (sometimes cute) take on time travel with a well-built protagonist. High potential for a thought-provoking and emotional read, especially if the author can deliver on the complex themes and keep the plot engaging.

this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chaptersi will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential  to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money onbut at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb  boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers..  i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me downMy 💰 on you

MC is witty and funny, as expected coming from the most unhinge author (its a compliment). Nice start, will continue to read it again soon!

A truly fantastic novel, with highly detailed and well-executed descriptions. The dialogues are also strong. However, some chapters feel a bit lengthy, and certain details could be condensed. Overall, it’s a great read!

henlo, author here. A few things you should know about this book.1. This is the first book that I'm committed to finishing until the end (likely 300+ chapters)2. I am ESL. Please notify me when you find a grammatical error in the book3. Technically this is not my first time writing a book. I've made a school project novel of 200 pages in another language.4. I like to think that the story focuses a lot on the relationship between characters rather than the plot of the game world. Of course, I'm still doing a lot of world building. But just keep that in mindIf you're still reading this sentence then thank you. Please check out the book if you're interested.Feel free to ask your questions. Seems like other authors do QnAs in their reviews