Okay, to the point, first, your writing still needs improvement, many are too short, and moreover, emotional blur, but I noticed an interesting flow, just don't get good execution, for the next you can learn how to write better, such as making the narrative feel alive, etc.

Hey dear author Your book resonated deeply with me, and I'm convinced it can inspire many more readers. I'd love to share some ideas on how to expand its reach and amplify its impact.May I have the privilege of discussing my thoughts with you?

Only got to page 9, will revisit  in a few months to see if the weirdness gets ironed out. Aka seriously edited.I thought the premise was interesting, but massive phrase duplication with minor tweaks started occurring across multiple pages.

I have to say, this opening scene is incredibly good. The fight scene is truly crafted like a high-quality artpiece. And the author mentioned r18 or something, hehehe. The plot is interesting,  char design is unique and likeable. Writing quality = best!This is going to be epic, 100% recommended!

Great work for an upcoming writer.I love the setup and plot but I think the story might be moving a bit too fast 😁

"Honestly, I've scrolled past this novel a few times, dismissing it due to a rather... lackluster synopsis. The author could definitely benefit from a more engaging summary. However, beyond that, the novel is quite solid.After reading 100 chapters, I can confidently recommend it. It's a refreshing change of pace. I wouldn't call it a masterpiece just yet, as it's still unfolding, and I suspect the author feels similarly. That said, it's genuinely impressed me. It's easily earned a spot in my top 10 favorites, given how intriguing the plot has been. And to the author, please don't be discouraged by any temporary low ratings; they'll certainly change over time. If you found this helpful, a like would be much appreciated—it took a bit to put together!"

I'm angry at myself for having read the whole thing, now I don't know what to do, I can't wait to find out more, the story is intriguing ! Can't wait for the new chapters !

Wish it had more chapters. Good premises. Fine female mc.

Not a big fan of contemporary romance, but I'd like to give this book a try. initial chapters are intresting and kept me engaged in reading!!! going good author.

I am a Simple Guyi like werewolves & Dragonssue me ok

It would be really nice if you could keep releasing some new chapters daily or weekly...But so far, I'm really enjoying the novel.I'm a huge fan of fantasy novel and yours is quite recommendable.

The story is interesting, being action-packed from the get go. The characters face a different type of apocalypse, which is a nice welcome because nobody said that the apocalypse had to only involve zombies, right?  There are some grammatical errors and the flow of the story is good. There were some areas that got me confused, but it's a fictional story lol. But on a serious note, I don't think it was wise to make a whole lot of noise when the enemy is most likely close by. Regardless of my review, go read the story and see if you like it.