omg!!! I've been a fan and slightly obsessed with monkey king since journey to the west. this novel brings a vivid picture about such incorporating new ideas am thrilled to see. writing quality is superb, character design very vivid. overall a top notch book!! we await more chaps from you author🙌

Well I am the author writing this shameless review of my own novel well I think you will enjoy my story I am still figuring out the writing style to bring you the actions as enjoyable as possible do share your thoughts on the chapters so I can change the things you don't like

This novel has a truely stupidly awful Mc. He acts like a spoiled 2 year old the entire time and hates all the kids his age for daring to invite him to do stuff with them. That in and of itself is kinda dumb but he spends the whole time like "I wanna be more social"? Dafuq is his plan here if anytime anyone tried to talk to them he just berates them until they leave him alone. It's just so colossally dumb.

The author shows a high level of english literary mastery. This read like a published novel that passed through editors as if it was to be published.This does not read like the typical lazy webnovel and should not be mentioned in te company thereoff.The style may not be to everyone's taste and the references and allusions may pull the readers out of immersion but the writting amd story telling is still excellent.

The story is good. write updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't have any other way of saying, but to call it poorly planned. At the beginning the story promises an interaction and a plot with the lead villainess of the story (which is also the main selling point of the novel, and the title).then it gets detailed into some nonsense side quest of him acquiring some sort of powerup (which stretches upto 21 chapters for no reason)it makes it boring and i almost lost my interest in reading it.cuz like... who wants to know about all the fillers and side plots even before the story began?initially you'd atleast want to hook your audience by showing a glimpse/teasing them what you promised.anyway, i skipped/glazed past those initial filler chapters and went straight to vol 2 by sheer will. Will see how story progresses from here on out

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I can only call it as a hidden gem in beast taming category. hope author continues to maintain the same standard.

I just found this book and the start looks very interesting. Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work, Author. 👍 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Ok I am gonna give it straightFirst 30 chapters almost garbage from a readers perspective Are they important to the story? Yes very important. They set an important framework for the whole story. The story after that is quite enjoyable, I binge read all the way until I caught up with the story.The reason I have such disdain for the first 30 chapters is that, we as the readers have no context , who is Ryan? Asmodius? What blessing? Who is the girl? Why every girl wants to hit Ryan?I really wished I had clear info abt this story construction from the synopsis. Also the synopsis dosent really cover the actual of the story at all.Good thing abt the story is that the writing quality is pretty decent, unless there is major info dump. There is enough intrigue to hook the reader. I concept of the book is quite intresting.Some problems I would say are that there are too many characters introduced too early and at once. As a result everyone has a shallow personality. Currently only 2 people in the story have a proper personality: Ryan and Arian. Other than everyone else is superficial. Also this is clearly not a villain novel yet, bad marketing is never good.Some recommendations(you know best author, these are just personal opinions)More slice of life chapters: like mc and Selenea went on a ‘date’. You could have taken this aspect slow. Give us more perspective on what he is feeling which walking with her, them asking questions about each other. Maybe it will actually give an idea why Ryan started falling in love with Selena cause all I see is he got forced to say she is is gf, she bullied him into going places, she life when he complements her.Another thing I would say is add a few filler chapters, this adds on to the Slice of life aspect. Like mc talking abt the sword he got or a chapter abt him finding out that the fairy is enslaved by the earring. I am just saying the story does not need to go from one bug event to the next. You can slow down a bit and build the world.Also dial down the annoyingness of the mc. He has experience of 20+ years due to his 2 life’s. He dosent need to act childish or immature when talking with every single character.I would also appreciate chapter from other chapters pov(not too many but enough to give an idea)Again I am not saying the story is bad. I am just saying it is not refined enough to reach his full potential.

Sad that Seven Seas Entertainment DMCA the translators. It was fun while it lasted.