Concept of Happiness

nice story. Please support my book too \"Baby, You Are Mine.\" Thank you so much

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Yah untuk cerita dan konsep seperti ini saya sangat suka, dan dari chapter pertama sampai 19 , tidak membosankan untuk di baca , 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😇😇😇😘😘

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A novel written by the infamous Mad Snail.The one who drop new novel every month and abandoned all of his previous work.Better dont read this, it wont have an ending and the mc is probably like the mc in Tales of demons of gods where he achieve single thing possible and ruin the storyline.And the 2 female protag which is his expertise where one of them is mad in love for the mc for no reason but he chase the other. And under 500 chapters the story probably circle around them. The mc, the idiot protag and the girl mc love that lusted over all the creature that have penis in the novel.

Be aware this is one of those shameless reviews out there. Because the first person who should love the story should be the author, who then shares his/her loved work to the other, bringing them the enjoyment to read.

Actually really good story. There doesn't seem to be any action so far but I think its better that way. . .. . ... . . . . . . . ..  . . . . . . . . . .

Your concept piqued my interest! It's hard writing detective stories so I hope you keep it up!The plot is like any other investigation novels but it's clearly different since the overall vibe of the MC is very different compared to them. I mean, I can't review anything more since there was just one chapter but I hope you continue venturing in this genre :)) Something to watch out for is your lack of article usage. Sometimes it gets confusing which was which if you don't use articles. Also, some of your verbs would be better if you left them on present perfect tenses since it will sound better than present tense, or just use infinitives... or so that's what I think after seeing the whole picture of the first chapter. We authors have a lot of things to improve on phew~! All I know is that this book is going places! Do continue it since I want to read more of these ^ ^