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Sabaroth_zarkiel
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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Are you dead since you haven't uploaded for some time?
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A captivating and thrilling novel with excellent description and world-building. The character backgrounds are well-developed, but the story would benefit from more detailed events.
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Hi So I'm writing this review cause i loved your novel i didn't leave the chapter comment because I was listening your story because I was busy so I can't able to read it😢 so although you story is great but I got little confused in the start of the novel maybe you can make it more clear about the reborn phenomenon beside that this story is perfact atleast for me 😁
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Great start can't wait for more, but a quick tip try putting more emotions for parts like not understanding that grandpa died or why his dad hit him ,his parents death, his frustration at the killers lack of understanding and cruelty and the lack of sympathy from the onlookers... Tho I don't know if you were planning on making him a dunce because what I can grasp from these chapters it doesn't seem as tho he has any form of education probably because their poor but a 15 year old won't act like that. But otherwise, great work
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Not really a fan of BL but i must say the novel has great potential, i especially love the title...so mysterious😎😎
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it's good. keep Going and keep updated pleaase
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A dash of comedy and a splash of crazy. This book has wonderful potential. Keep up the good work.
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Nice story so far, please update more frequently and also add some more spice and twist to the story to make it look much more entertaining to the readers like me
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J ai eu beaucoup de plaisir en lisant votre roman je le conseille vivement , hâte de lire les prochains chapitres tout en vous souhaitant beaucoup de courage
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Man what the hell are you writing even 3 year old kid wrote better than that and what the hell with these people liking the work it's one of worst work ive ever seen
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The plot is irritating, and the mc never seems to learn his lesson, he keeps doing the same thing that got him in trouble over and over again.
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This is definitely one of my new favorite.
Alpha Damon’s Greatest Regret