Death Mage with an SS-Rank Talent

I'm droping this novel because there will be some ntr on about chapter 152-163i don't know exactly what chapter it is

please get an editor, while i didnt see any spelling errors which makes me happy, the sentence structure is awful. also please check to make sure that you arent trying to make a wors that doesnt have a plural form into a plural word. preys should just be prey, i didnt see it but please dont use equipments just equipment, etc

It's storage wars.  If you thought this was going to be Indiana Jones, you were mistaken.  And this gets repetitive very quickly.  New towns, new storage units to raid, and everyone in America is a redneck racist apparently.  I wouldn't mind this if the action was good.  Too bad there is not suspense.  If you want a good treasure hunting novel, I suggest Ghost Blow Out the Light.  Now that one is a classic.

Personaly i believe that ‘GINKEN’ is a very good and captivating novel and noticing that the author Timothy Is from Slovenia where their mother tongue isnt english i believe his use and knowledge Of language skills and literacy skills are quite remarkable!The story progression is also very well thought out, Noticing the very small detail that Timothy reads the Notes left by other readers to help improve his work is very nice to know and im happy to keep on reading and i hope to see this novel go somewhere big one day

I see potential here and hope that it keeps it up. story isn't mind blowingly unique but is more like a fresh breeze after a long period of stagnant air. No system at least as of yet but just good old slow story progress and thas coming from someone who likes systems.

didn't read but I 100% agree with Garresta this is the best title in the existence of titles, anyone who disagrees can fight me.😡😠😡😠😡😠

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