I love this😊 The first chapter alone made me dive into more.So intriguing and attractive.I'm sure no one would read this and not yearn for more.Keep up the good work 👍

The story concept is unique, hope to see more chapters on this, Kudos Writer. #sulatpinoy

this book has a lot of potential. I already like the world building and character design. Keep up the good work author.

The story is quite nice, the characters literally come alive in my mind.                                                        .                            .

Hello, readers!I’d love to hear your thoughts and opinions about the novel so far. Feel free to share anything on your mind—I value all feedback and will do my best to respond to your questions. I also want to apologize for any rough spots in the story since I’m just starting out as a writer. But I’m committed to improving, and your feedback will help me grow.

There are so many grammatical mistakes in every paragraph you wrote. I had to re-read it multiple times to get the paragraphs to make any sense. It seems like this novel was copied and pasted but with a whole bunch of problems

Crazy. I think this is one of the few instances where I find myself intrigued by the muscle head type of MC. Mind you, I wouldn't say Drai is the all muscles and no brains sort like Mash from Mashle. He's quite entertaining and has a lot of heart.The story has some nice comedy and heart warming moment. Thankfully, before the ceremony for granting Classes, I was pleased not to see the cliche mockery of the MC before he goes up to get his class, which was a little refreshing. I haven't read that far yet, but I assume the MC isn't going to end up with the Class everyone expects - the Fatcows or Ball Buster. (I jumped headfirst into the story without reading the synopsis, btw)Interesting story!!

This is a story with a very good start. And I hope it develops even better in the future.

"So only by hurting you badly will you be mine...What else must I destroy to possess you?..."   What a strong word for a man to tell her how badly he wants her. But must he be proud to admit that she means a lot to him and that he loves her rather than making her feel inferior and so beneath him...

Story so far isn't so bad. Pretty basic setting, girl plays dating sim, girl dies, girl now has to survive in said game with like a twist to keep it interesting. The writing was mediocre in the first few pages but is improving pretty quickly surprisingly. The mc is pretty chill and has like a personality. The love interests aren't that developed as of now, but I like what I'm seeing. What really was the turning point of this story to me was definitely chapter 11. Like damn, I just didn't expect that kind of thing to happen in this kind of story.  If you're a fan of this genre, give it a shot and stick with it. Review may change depending on what's to come.

i like the way mc kent collect sp. nima is also funny.

Ah yes, I had to drop this after 5 chapters just because of the rampant Selfcest. The Su Yu on Su Yu action was too much for my poor innocent eyes.