Looks like author redid the 2nd chapter, and to be honest. I am liking this variation more than the original.  I like showing love to new writers and this seems to be pretty good so far.  1 mistake new writers on here make is going at way too fast paced and before they know it, their MC is WAY too OP and they run out of ideas creating a dead book.  Keep it slow paced and you will have a good run.Looking forward to the next chapter!

Love the book, but I have a potentially suggestion for the ending (don’t worry about it if you have plans). Maybe he grows on power, and the book ends off with him entering the main reality, but immediately cuts off the moment he enters as the author (people like you) can’t actually affect the humans of Earth. Idk, thought it would be cool. (And if he does, making him bring the girls too). Either way, thanks for your time

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Hello readers author here, if you guys have any suggestions for me to improve the novel please tell me so

story is quite impressive and different but some subplots are quite cliche but it is interesting to read and entertaining let's see how it develops in the future

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

A genuinely great novel. To all reading this reviews, just give it a try for at least 10-20 chapters to have your own opinion on this book. At the very least, even if you dont like it you wont feel like you wasted your time.Now for the rating :World building : its good, as the story developp so does the information we have on the world outside the first hive. As for detail when describing place, its in the good range being not too little but also not too specific to the point of being boring.Story : we follow the mc developping his bee empire like the title say. So far its been great, the mc actually stick to this goal which is nice. (even if thats fueled by one big incensitive lol) Character : the side character feels alive and 3D, they arent just a one time appearance or useless deadweight who cant do anything without the mc. They will make you feel things, be it joy or sadness. For the female lead and main character :The strongest point of this novel in my opinion is the female lead Ambrosia. Are you tired of female lead who are just dumb, hit the mc at every opportunity, act like children, need to be saved ever single time, and dont act like their character setting would suggest? Rejoice! Here Ambrosia actually act like a Queen bee. She make growing her hive the number one priority and actually act like it. She can be stern but caring, she actually is smart, rational and mature. She sees when the mc feels down and help him. Tldr she is just a great character overall and a breath of fresh air. As for Nectus, he is fine, maybe you will find him stupid and à bit annoying at first, but give it some chapter and he will become better. (main reason why im saying to give it at least 10-20 chapter before judging).Uploading : great consistency rn, two chapters per day.To end this review, i would like to thank the author for all the effort he put in this novel and i hope with this review i gave you at least the motivation to give this great novel a try. If you disagree with some of my take dont hesitate to  tell me in the reply. Have a nice day ;)

Honestly, when I skimmed through the first six chapters, I felt like you’ve got some really nice touches, especially in the fight scenes. The way you described the dragon battle was exciting—it made me feel the tension and movement, especially when Rahit was facing the dragon head-on, and that moment when he noticed the mark on its face and the sadness in its eyes. It gave the whole scene a strange, deeper feeling.  But honestly, I felt the dialogue could be a bit smoother. Like when Ash said, "Go on without me," it felt a bit cliché. You might want to add lines that feel more natural or reflect his personality better. And there were a few moments where the sequence of events felt slightly off, but that’s totally normal in early drafts.  As for the world-building, I think it needs a bit more detail. What's the deal with the Kings’ Powers? Why are the dragons attacking? I got the sense that there's a big mystery behind everything, but there aren’t many clues yet. If you start adding subtle hints about the world's history or why the dragons are appearing, it’ll keep readers more hooked.  Overall, the story definitely has strong potential, especially with your action scenes and the small details you include. Rahit feels relatable, especially when he hesitated to kill the dragon. And that moment when the arrow pierced the dragon? Honestly, it was an unexpected, brilliant twist. I felt like you planted a seed for a mystery that’ll unfold later.  So, I think you're on a good path—you just need to smooth out the dialogue a bit and add more world-building details. And trust me, you've got something special here. 💯

The book is really interesting and especially the characters and how they are written . Would recommend to readers !!!

I really love how the author portrays the characters and the world background and i love your writing quality. i love chris and sky and how the story is developing, there are people who don’t like long stories but this book is sooo good i would read it even if it reaches 300 chapters.it would great if you update it everyday like you are doing these days and lastly gurrllll can u please do a mass realise this month.

The Concept is fresh and Unique, Its a good set up for an Isekai novel, and i‘m hoping It delivers in the next chapter

I promise you this novel is worth your time. Please read and leave a comment. Thank you.