The Raven and the Snake

It's awesome

It is too cliche plot, mc has countless undead to help him level up yet he is barely keeping with other characters who should be many times slower at gathering exp. His attributes are so much more than others yet he had to give his all to win. Then once he gets to academy it is all tournaments till latest chapters- 500+.It feels more like tournaments world story than anything else.

Ok, the novel is slightly interesting. And, yes, it resembles superficially to I have a mansion in the post apocalyptic world, but just inbthe premise of the MC going from and back to gis own world. This ia whole genre, and this novel is more into the development of the MC than the power-harem fantasy. If the novel gets picked for voting I will vote for it... except if it is picked besides Plague Doctor: All my votes are for Plague Doctor.

Awesome novel! I've gotten completely addicted to your story. The plot is slightly overused but still original. Well, how do I put this... MC going back in time to save the world type of plot, but the objectives, enemies, and settings are totally different from what I've mostly read.The world is intriguing and unlike anything I've heard before. The fact that there is a 'GOD' ai is still a bit confusing to me and would like to know more about it. I have a lot of questions about it, like why is it evil? Why does the MC want to stop it other than to save the world? How did it become 'GOD'?The MC is smart, catches on to things quickly, and actually relatable. The story progresses at a perfect steady pace, giving enough time for the reader to actually understand and feel the feelings while also moving fast enough so that the reader doesn't get bored. The descriptions are on a whole nother level. They are vivid, visualizes the scene and situation perfectly and actually immersive. There weren't any confusing sentences so far and the action parts were really enjoyable to read. Most of the explanations were logical, natural, and some of them are actual facts. I learned several things that I didn't know while reading this novel. Respect to the Author for doing his research!Lastly, the thing I like most about this is the writing style. It's amazingly appealing, and catches my attention instantly. The sentence structures go well with other sentences and conveys the feelings the author wants. Some of the parts are witty and there are a few relatable sentences and jokes here and there. As a fellow author, I really envy your way of writing and would really love to learn to write like that.In short, I'll give this book a 9/10. I had to deduct a point because your work was so brilliant it made me jealous! Please teach me your way of writing, I simply can't get enough of it! Definitely going to keep reading to the end, no matter how many fast-passes I might have to sink in the future.To everyone reading the reviews, I would 100% reccommend this, especially if you like system and video-games genre. PS: I'm actually serious about wanting to learn from you. Would really appreciate if you can teach me.

I couldn't get over the grammar 🥺 I'm sorry author. I also don't like the use of japanese address in the book, it feels weird when the characters aren't japanese

Good novel keep the good work and thank you for your hard work <3                                                                                          

So i let it progress a chapters so i can read a lot of them..and i come back and it FUCKIN WANTS 10GEMS PER CHAPTER.!! 10 really? MAKE IT 20 BETTER FUCK IT ALL UP...STUPID MADAFAKA...enjoy the rating *****

Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.