The story is going great bro, just write the story a little better, I really want to see luo zheng meeting luo feng, and also the trouble between xiao yan and tang san

A good idea and writing style write more chapters on a daily basis.

I like the concept of the story, I'm really looking forward to this story going further.

OMG! I love your book dear author! I love the story of the moon and the sun. I feel sad about it though lols. It was a great story. Please update frequently and hope you release a lot of chapters instead of just 1. 😁 Overall, I really like it!

The book is well written especially the main character and please update it regularly like 2 or 3 chapters a day if possible 👍

I enjoyed reading this. The dual system is a nice twist from conventional novels! Imo the pacing was good, it didn't feel overly detailed and boring, nor did it feel too rushed. I like that they have to slowly develop their emotions overtime rather than quickly gaining an op system right away. Currently the characters and their personalities are clear with little or no confusion, so that's good! I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more of it in the future

A Masterpiece That Redefined My Love for Fantasy, A Must-Read!

Hello guys sorry for the late reply. i was sick for few days.

I don't normally post a review until I finish a story because I've been through some serious let downs, but today I break my habit! This novel has me in a choke hold, and I hope it never ends. Not only is the writing clean and witty, but the author uses each word to craft this world perfectly and bring each character to life. I recommend this novel to anyone who likes a good read; it's got suspense, humor, and so much heart ! Bravo, dear author, you have crafted a masterpiece! 🤗🥰😊

how many women in harem and is there school like acadmy drama ? is there romance like kiss and more then that ? please reply so that ii can start reading

I really wanna delve deeper into Eirlys's story.

Recommended: #Fantasy, #Magic, #WeaktoStrong, #Tragedy. This is a must-read for anyone seeking a fresh and thrilling fantasy saga. Starting is a bit slow, but as the story progresses, it becomes more interesting. I currently am chapter 77, and its getting better.